Upcoming Agent Spotlight Interviews & Guest Posts

  • Riley Jay Davis Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/11/2026
  • Hannah Teachout Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/23/2026
  • Michaela Whatnall Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/30/2026
  • Hollie Michaels Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 12/7/2026
  • J.D. Myall Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 12/16/2026

Agent Spotlight & Agent Spotlight Updates

  • Agent Spotlights & Interviews were all edited in 2021. Every year since then, I update some of them. I also regularly add information regarding changes in their agency as I find it. Agents spotlights and interviews been updated through most of the letter "R" as of 5/12/2026 and many have been reviewed by the agents. Look for more information as I find the time to update more agent spotlights.

For the Love of Reading Giveaway Hop: Book of Your Choice or Amazon Gift Card

 


Happy Thursday Everyone! Today I'm thrilled to be participating in the For the Love of Reading Giveaway Hop hosted by 
The Mommy Island and The Kids Did It. I love to read, so I'm excited to be a part of a giveaway hop celebrating books. 

Book of Your Choice or Amazon Gift Card

I'm offering a book of your choice or Amazonn Gift Card giveaway this month. While you can pickk whatever book you want, here are some upcoming MG and YA releases you may want to choose: You can find descriptions of these books on Goodreads. 







If you haven't found a book you want, you can win a $10 Amazon Gift Card.


 Giveaway Details

One lucky entrant selected by the entry form will receive a book of their choice listed above or a $10 Amazon Gift Card. Open to entrants internationally as long as Book Depository ships to you for free, 13 years and older. Open for entry from 3/02 – 3/23/2023 at 11:59 pm EST. NO PURCHASE NECESSARY. The selected winner will have 48 hours to respond to the notification email to claim this prize or a new winner will be selected.

Please note that you must be a blog follower and leave a blog comment to enter the contest. 


Upcoming Interviews and Guest Posts

Monday, March 6 I have an agent/author guest post by Lizz Nagle and J.A. Nielsen and a giveaway of J.A.’s YA fantasy The Claiming and a query critique giveaway by Lizz

Monday, March 13, I have an agent/author guest post by Sara Crow and Maria Jose Fitzgerald and a giveaway of Maria’s MG contemporary mystery Turtles of the Midnight Moon and a query critique giveaway by Sara

Thursday, March 16, I'm participating in the Chasing Rainbows Giveaway Hop

Monday, March 20 I have an agent spotlight interview with Kristen Terrette and a query critique giveaway

Monday, March 27 I’m doing a post about a scam authors need to watch out for

Hope to see you on Monday!

And here are all the other blogs participating in this blog hop:

 

 

 

Debut Author Interview: Jenna Voris and Made of Stars Giveaway and IWSG Post

Happy Wednesday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have debut author Jenna Voris here to share about her YA science fiction Made of Stars. It sounds like a well-plotted story with memorable characters that I’m excited to read.

Here’s a blurb from Goodreads: 

Inspired by the lawless love story of Bonnie and Clyde, Jenna Voris's heart-stopping tale of passion and crime will have you seeing stars.

Shane and Ava are a team. He steals the aircraft, she charms their mark, and together they take what they need. Not even their distracting chemistry could get in the way. Until Shane was caught and left to rot on a prison moon. Now, freshly escaped from confinement and simmering with anger, he has his sights set on their biggest job yet.

Cyrus just graduated from the flight academy with a shiny new position lined up reporting to a well-respected general. On his very first assignment, he stops the outlaws in their tracks--or, he would have, if the annoyingly handsome Lark hadn't fallen for Ava's deception.

But when Shane uncovers a top-secret plot that would leave his home world at the mercy of Cyrus's military leaders, he makes it his mission to thwart them at all costs. It isn't long before Shane and Ava make interstellar headlines with each new heist. And thanks to a chance run-in with the rebels, Cyrus is caught between two versions of the truth. He must pick a side and fast. Because Shane and Ava will bring the planet to its knees...or die trying.

 


Before I get to Jenna’s interview I have my IWSG Post.

Posting: The first Wednesday is officially Insecure Writer's Support Group Day.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!

The awesome co-hosts this month are: Diedre Knight, Tonya Drecker, Bish Denham, Olga Godim, and JQ Rose!

Optional Question: Have you ever read a line in a novel or a clever plot twist that caused you to have author envy?

I’ve definitely read many lines in novels and plot twists that have made me admire an author’s talents. I don’t know if I would describe the feeling as author envy. It’s more of an appreciation of how talented an author is. And yes, I wish I could write like my favorite authors and wish I could produce stories faster like other authors do.

But I’ve always been a reader at heart. So I’m mostly grateful when authors entertain me with their words and plots.

Do you feel envious of other authors?

Interview With Jenna Voris

Hi Jenna! Thanks so much for joining us.

1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer.

Hello! I feel like a lot of people say that they always knew they wanted to be an author, but that wasn’t quite true for me, mostly because I didn’t think that “author” was a job real people could have. I ended up going to college for journalism and during the course of my degree, I realized beat reporting was never going to be for me. The rules felt too structured—as they should be when you’re reporting actual news—but I was so bored that I just started jotting down other story ideas during class and experimenting with structure in every assignment. The first book I ever wrote and completed was written partially during those journalism classes (sorry to every professor who had to put up with me) and after I graduated, I started pursuing publication more seriously.

2. That’s something that you were able to focus on writing your story while in college classes. Where did you get the idea for Made of Stars?

I’m a theatre kid (if you couldn’t tell be everything about me) and if you were a theatre kid in 2012, you were contractually obligated to be obsessed with Jeremy Jordan. He was in his peak Newsies era and he’d been in the Bonnie and Clyde Broadway musical a few years earlier. I had obviously listened to the cast recording in high school and was such a fan of the music. The summer before I was going to go back to grad school, I was querying my first (very bad) book and trying to figure out what to write next. One of the songs from the Bonnie and Clyde musical came on my Spotify shuffle as I was coming home from work and it just sort of clicked. I thought the story was interesting, there was a real historical framework for me to follow, and it had everything that I would want to read—danger, crime, betrayal, star-crossed lovers, political intrigue, etc. I went home, started writing, and these characters have lived rent free in my head ever since.

Your Writing Process

3. Were you a plotter or a punster when you wrote Made of Stars? Has your plotting process changed since you wrote this book? If so, how?

Made of Stars was the first book I ever tried to plot. It helped that I was drawing inspiration from real life events, so I had a timeline of things that had to happen in a certain order. Once I knew how to translate that into story structure (aka, what was the midpoint, what was the Act III break, etc) everything fell into place. That’s not to say it was easy—I’ve done a lot of revisions on this book since I started it in 2019, but I did complete the first draft a lot quicker than I had finished anything before and I think that’s mostly due to having some sort of roadmap to follow. I’m still not a huge plotter now. For me, writing is a process of getting to know your characters, so sometimes I don’t know what choices they would make unless I’ve jumped in and started writing, but I’m definitely more structured than I was before writing this book.

4. It sounds like we’re the same kind of plotters. Reviewers have said that your book is hard to put down. What did you do to make your story a page-turner? What advice do you have for other writers?

That’s so nice of them! I’m a big advocate of writing the book you want to read. You’re going to read your book more than anyone else and it should be enjoyable, even if parts of drafting/revising are hard to work through. When I was drafting Made of Stars, I made sure to include scenes and storylines that I was genuinely excited to write—whether it was the tense, romantic buildup to the first kiss or an interesting piece of worldbuilding. I really do love this book and hope that readers will be able to tell how much fun I had with these characters.

5. What was a challenge you faced in writing Made of Stars before or after you obtained an agent? How did you overcome the challenge, and what did you learn from the process?

I feel like this book and I have been through a lot together. It wasn’t the first book I wrote, but it was the first one that felt “good enough.” I’ve done a lot of big, developmental rewrites both with my agent and my editor that I don’t think 2019 Drafting Jenna would have been able to fathom. There are so many scenes and characters that ended up on the cutting room floor. It’s only now that I can look back and know that every change I made was for the best and only enhanced the story I was trying to tell in the first place. If there’s anything I’ve learned from this process, it’s to not be precious with your words and not be afraid to try something new.

Your Road to Publication

6. I so agree with you that it’s best not to think of your words as precious. Your agent is Claire Friedman. How did she become your agent, and what was your road to publication like?

I queried Made of Stars at the end of 2019 and into the beginning of 2020. During that time, I sent it to every agent on my query list and got exactly zero responses. The overall consensus was that YA sci-fi just wasn’t selling, which was great to hear as someone who had just spent a significant amount of time writing a YA sci-fi. I entered the Author Mentor Match program on a whim as my last hurrah for Made of Stars and I ended up getting in! I revised with my mentor and when I was ready to query again, I was more or less ready for it to go the same way. I had already queried my agent before Author Mentor Match and most agencies won’t accept the same manuscript unless it’s been significantly revised. My book had been revised, but the query and the opening chapters were still the same, so I just sent an email and hoped she didn’t remember ignoring my book three months earlier. Fortunately, it worked out!

7. How do you feel that working with your agent or editor strengthened your story?

Literally so much! I talked a bit about this earlier, but I did a significant revision with both my agent and my editor. They both had pretty big notes, which was super intimidating, but once they explained the vision and how it would work with the story, I couldn’t wait to try them out. Writing is such a solitary activity that I personally love the moments where it gets to be collaborative like that.

Marketing

8. I noticed on your website that you have hired a publicist. How has hiring a publicist helped you market your book? Would you recommend that other debut authors hire one? Why?

I actually didn’t hire a publicist—the contact listed on my website is someone from my publishing house!

9. That’s cool that your publisher has a publicist working on your publicity. What other ways are you planning to promote your book?

Part of the reason I wanted to pursue traditional publication is because I knew I didn’t have the marketing/publicity skills to make it in self-publishing. The authors who do that are so incredibly badass and I simply don’t have the mental capacity to think about all the things they do. I’m lucky that I have a publicist at my publishing house.  

10. What are you working on now?

I’m working on revisions for my second book! It’s called Every Time You Hear That Song and it comes out in spring 2024. It’s a sapphic, coming of age road trip story about a girl who goes on a cross-country quest to find her favorite singer’s lost time capsule and I’m very excited for everyone to read it one day.

Thanks for sharing all your advice, Jenna. You can find Jenna at:

Twitter: @JennaVoris

Instagram: @JennaVoris

Website:jennamvoris.com

Giveaway Details

Jenna is generously offering a pre-order of Made of Stars for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by March 18th. If your e-mail is not on your Google Profile, you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address.

If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog and/or follow me on Twitter or Jenna on her social media sites, mention this in the comments, and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. This book giveaway is International wherever the Book Depository ships for free.

Upcoming Interviews and Guest Posts

Tomorrow, March 2 I’m participating in the For the Love of Reading Giveaway Hop

Monday, March 6 I have an agent/author guest post by Lizz Nagle and J.A. Nielsen and a giveaway of J.A.’s YA fantasy The Claiming and a query critique giveaway by Lizz

Monday, March 13, I have an agent/author guest post by Sara Crow and Maria Jose Fitzgerald and a giveaway of Maria’s MG contemporary mystery Turtles of the Midnight Moon and a query critique giveaway by Sara

Thursday, March 16, I'm participating in the Chasing Rainbows Giveaway Hop

Monday, March 20 I have an agent spotlight interview with Kristen Terrette and a query critique giveaway

Monday, March 27 I’m doing a post about a scam authors need to watch out for

Hope to see you tomorrow!

 

 

 

Literary Agent Interview: Bethany Hendrix Interview and Query Critique Giveaway

Today I’m thrilled to have agent Bethany Hendrix (previously Fulk) here. She is a junior literary agent at Holloway Literary.

Status Update on 9/19/2024: Bethany is currently an agent at Spencerhill Associates Literary Agency and is open to submissions. Please check the agency website to learn how to query her.
Status Update on 12/16/2025: Bethany is currently closed to submissions. Check the agency website to learn when she reopens to queries.

Hi­ Bethany! Thanks so much for joining us.

About Bethany:

1. Tell us how you became an agent, how long you’ve been one, and what you’ve been doing as an agent.

I’ve always loved reading and writing, and eventually editing, so I started pursuing internships in publishing once I graduated college. After years of interning with agencies and a publishing house, I found a spot with Holloway Literary that offered a mentorship to grow from an intern to an agent! As of August 2021, I officially started working as an agent and have been loving every minute of it. I’ve read so many amazing books and have signed some fantastic clients, most of which are now on sub with editors!

 About the Agency:

 2. Share a bit about your agency and what it offers to its authors.

 Holloway Literary offers boutique literary agency representation for authors, and literary management for screenwriters, directors, and producers. Our priority is to make writers’ dreams come true! We have a fantastic roster of best-selling authors from across genres.

 For me, communication with my authors is very important. We have a great rapport, and I love to chat about what they’re working on or help brainstorm ideas! We set our goals and collaborate with each other on how we want to move forward together.

 What She’s Looking For:

 3. What age groups do you represent—picture books, MG, and/or YA? What genres do you represent and what are you looking for in submissions for these genres?

I am open to Middle Grade and Young Adult submissions. I look for a lot of similar things in both age groups—fantasy, historical fantasy/alternate history, paranormal, and retellings of myths/legends/fairytales.

For MG, I’m also open to mysteries and friendship stories. Think Rick Riordian-esq books, Amari and the Nightbrothers, and The Sisters Grimm series.

For YA, I’m also open to gothic/horror and rom coms as well! Think Sabaa Tahir, Sarah Dessen, Adrienne Young, Never Have I Ever, and To All the Boys series.

4.  Is there anything you would be especially excited to seeing in the genres you are interested in?

I’d love to see some adventure stories in MG! Give me some quests and heists. For YA, I want a book that gives me all those high school feelings of first loves, embarrassing moments, and crazy shenanigans! I’m also always looking for books from underrepresented voices, diving into myths/worlds/places we don’t usually see a lot of!

What She Isn’t Looking For:

5. What types of submissions are you not interested in?

I don’t accept Nonfiction, Picture Books, or Adult submissions. I’m not the best fit for gore or anything super scary, political stories, or stories featuring suicide, rape, or abuse.

Agent Philosophy:

6. What is your philosophy as an agent both in terms of the authors you want to work with and the books you want to represent?

I have to click, not only with the book itself, but with the author as well. There’s something magical that happens when you read a book and fall in love with it, have an editorial vision for it, and share it with an author who feels the same way you do! I love working with authors who want to collaborate and bounce ideas off each other when needed, but also love being able just to offer support and communication.

As an agent, it’s important to me to help put stories into the world that people can relate to and fall in love with. The more people that are able to see themselves in the story and in the characters, the better!

Editorial Agent:

7. Are you an editorial agent? If so, what is your process like when you’re working with your authors before submitting to editors?

I am an editorial agent and it’s one of my favorite things about the job! I start with an edit letter detailing more of the developmental/big picture items that need worked on, and give suggestions on how to build on the foundation they’ve already created. From there, we move on to in-line comments and more of the dialogue/transitions/passiveness/etc until it’s time to comb through for repetitive words and that fun stuff. Throughout the process, I make sure my authors know that everything is just a suggestion and how they fix it is something we can talk about—I’m happy to hear from them and work together on making their book the best it can be.

Query Methods and Submission Guidelines: (Always verify before submitting)

8. How should authors query you and what do you want to see with the query letter?

Email your query to submissions@hollowayliterary.com. On Holloway Literary’s website, you’ll be able to find all the submission guidelines, but as an overview:

-Make sure my name is in the subject line (along with the title of the book and its genre) so it gets put in my folder.

-Include the word count within your pitch, and a short bio of yourself at the end.

-Following the query, paste the first 15 pages into the body of the manuscript.

9.  Do you have any specific dislikes in query letters or the first pages submitted to you?

As long as it has all the information I need about the story and you, the writer, I’m usually pretty easy-going on queries. Just don’t be rude! Be yourself and tell me about your story—that’s all I can ask.

Response Time:

10. What’s your response time to queries and requests for more pages of a manuscript?

For queries, I try and keep my response time within 2-3 weeks. If I request more, the time varies, but I hope to get better with my response times this year. Everything gets a response, though, so always feel free to check in if it’s past the time given when you submitted your pages.

Self-Published and Small Press Authors:

11.  Are you open to representing authors who have self-published or been published by smaller presses? What advice do you have for them if they want to try to find an agent to represent them?

Of course—some of my authors now have self-published or published through smaller presses. As long as what they’re pitching me hasn’t been published previously, then it’s okay!

12. With all the changes in publishing—self-publishing, hybrid authors, more small publishers—do you see the role of agents changing at all? Why?

I think an agent’s role will stay the same, even as publishing changes and shifts. Overall, we’re there to support, advocate, assist, etc. and I don’t see that going away, just adapting to fit with the new norm.

Clients:

13. Who are some of the authors you represent?

I am so happy to represent some great writers: Valerie Norton, Tiffani Burkett, Amy Eversley, Hallie Christensen, Alex Kennington, and Shelby Kisgen!

Interviews and Guest Posts:

14. Please share the links to any interviews, guest posts, and podcasts you think would be helpful to writers interested in querying you.

Writing and Illustrating Interview-Part 1

Writing and Illustrating Interview-Part 2

Links and Contact Info:

15. Please share how writers should contact you to submit a query and your links on the Web.

To query me, please follow the guidelines on the submission page:

https://hollowayliterary.com/submissions/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/bethanyfulk

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/hollowayliterary/

Website: https://www.bethany-writes.com/

MSWL: https://www.manuscriptwishlist.com/mswl-post/bethany-fulk/

Additional Advice:

16. Is there any other advice you’d like to share with aspiring authors that we haven’t covered?

Writing and querying can feel like such a lonely, daunting journey full of rejections, but publishing is all about timing, luck, and perseverance. Find your writing community and lean on them through the rough drafts, the revisions, and yes and no’s of querying. Each book you write is going to be better than the last, so the more you learn about and practice your craft, the better your book is going to be because of it. And while it may sound a little cliché: don’t give up. Keep coming back better and stronger than before!

Thanks for sharing all your advice, Bethany.

­Bethany is generously offering a query critique to one lucky winner. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment through March 4th. If your e-mail is not on your Google Profile, you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. If you do not want to enter the contest, that's okay. Just let me know in the comments.

If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry. This is an international giveaway.

Have any experience with this agent? See something that needs updating? Please leave a comment or e-mail me at natalieiaguirre7@gmail.com

Note: These agent profiles and interviews presently focus on agents who accept children's fiction. Please take the time to verify anything you might use here before querying an agent. The information found here is subject to change.

 

 

 

Wish Big Giveaway Hop - $10 Amazon Gift Card



Happy Thursday Everyone! Today I'm thrilled to be participating in the Wish Big Giveaway Hop hosted by MamatheFox. I hope you're surviving the winter and looking forward to spring. We were fooled by a mild winter with no snow or bitter cold most of January. Then we had a snowstorm and days of bitter cold. I'm looking forward to warmer weather, but March is always an iffy month. At least it's been good weather to hunker in and read a lot. 

Amazon Gift Card Giveaway


 I'm offering a $10 gift card to Amazon for this giveaway.

 Giveaway Details

One lucky entrant selected by the entry form will receive a $15 Amazon Gift Card. Open to entrants internationally as long The Book Depository ships to you for free, 13 years and older. Open for entry from 2/16 – 2/28/2023 at 11:59 pm EST. NO PURCHASE NECESSARY. The selected winner will have 48 hours to respond to the notification email to claim this prize or a new winner will be selected.

Please note that you must be a blog follower and leave a blog comment to enter the contest. 

a Rafflecopter giveaway

Upcoming Interviews and Guest Posts

Monday, February 20 I have an agent spotlight interview with Lori Steel and a query critique giveaway

Wednesday, March 1 I have an interview with debut author Jenna Voris and a giveaway of her YA sci-fi Made of Stars and my IWSG Post

Thursday, March 2 I’m participating in the For the Love of Reading Giveaway Hop

Monday, March 6 I have an agent/author guest post by Lizz Nagle and J.A. Nielsen and a giveaway of J.A.’s YA fantasy The Claiming and a query critique giveaway by Lizz

Monday, March 13, I have an agent/author guest post by Sara Crow and Maria Jose Fitzgerald and a giveaway of Maria’s MG contemporary mystery Turtles of the Midnight Moon and a query critique giveaway by Sarac

Thursday, March 16, I'm participating in the Chasing Rainbows Giveaway Hop

Monday, March 20 I have an agent spotlight interview with Kristen Terrette and a query critique giveaway

Hope to see you on Monday!

And here are all the other blogs participating in this blog hop:

MamatheFox and all participating blogs are not held responsible for sponsors who fail to fulfill their prize obligations.

Write Your Villains Like Heroes by Author Shawn Peters and The Unforgettable Logan Foster Giveaway

Happy Monday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have Shawn Peters back to share about his new MG, The Unforgettable Logan Foster and the Shadow of Doubt. I interviewed Shawn when his first book The Unforgettable Logan Foster, was released. His new book sounds even more action-packed than the first book, and I’m excited to read it.

Here’s a blurb from Goodreads:

Sometimes, it’s not so easy to tell the differences between good guys and the bad ones. Filled with superheroes, supervillains, and epic showdowns, The Unforgettable Logan Foster and the Shadow of Doubt is the thrilling second book in the acclaimed Logan Foster series from super-author Shawn Peters.

After using his photographic memory to defeat Necros and her minions, Logan has seen his life change completely. Now, the Multinational Authority for Superhuman Control (MASC) is keeping a close eye on everything he does in order to keep him out of Necros’s clutches.

But when Logan stumbles upon the fact that Necros was in the area on the very same day he became an orphan, he can’t help but wonder—is MASC hiding the truth about who his parents really are

When superheroes mysteriously start going missing, all signs point to the same supervillain who also may hold the clues to Logan’s past. Only Logan—along with his super-strong best friend, Elena, and their new bestie, Connie—can uncover the truth, find the missing superheroes, and stop Necros. Will Logan be able to save the day and uncover the truth about his birth parents before it’s too late It’s another action-packed Logan Foster adventure from super-author Shawn Peters.

Follower News

Before I get to Shawn's guest post, I have Follower News to share. Jean Davis has a new release,


Everyone Dies: A Collection of Dark Tales. Here's a blurb:  
Otherworldly creatures, the not-so-dearly departed, fellow man, and creations of our own demise patiently wait while we bumble through life, thinking we are in control. The end is always near. And here are a few buy links: 

Amazon
B&N
Direct from the author


Write Your Villains Like Heroes by Shawn Peters

When you write about superheroes like I did in my debut series, THE UNFORGETTABLE LOGAN FOSTER and THE UNFORGETTABLE LOGAN FOSTER AND THE SHADOW OF DOUBT, everyone wants to know who your favorite superhero of all time is.

Well, I’m not going to tell you the answer to that question here – though it’s easily found online if you listen to certain interviews--  because I don’t want to talk about heroes. At least, I don’t want to talk about the characters who are seen as heroes by the reader.

Instead, let’s talk about villains, and how to create really interesting ones.

For the first couple of millennia of human storytelling, villains were just… evil. The Wicked Witch of the West was just green and mean. Sauron wanted absolute power over Middle Earth. Dracula had a thing for sucking on necks, Shere Khan wanted to eat Mowgli just to be cruel, and Iago simply wants to ruin Othello’s life. You can go all the way back to The Devil, whose only motivation in the Bible and dozens of books since then is the misery of mankind.

 

But in recent times, “bad guys” are having a moment, because the really interesting ones are no longer being written like villains. Instead, they’re written like heroes who have gotten something important wrong, and that’s far more intriguing. Or course, this concept of a fully realized villain isn’t truly new. I can even remember when I learned about that idea.

I was a junior at Santa Monica High School, I was a drama geek, and I had just been cast in my first “bad guy” role. Not the main villain, mind you, but a real jerk who hurt and lied to the woman who loved and supported him. And to be clear, I was NOT doing a good job playing him. So, I went to my director and mentor, Dr. Frank Ford (after whom I named the character Dr. Francis X. Chrysler in my debut) and I asked him how to play a bad guy. I’ll never forget his response. He said, “You’re not a bad guy. No one can play a bad guy. You’re the hero of your story, and no one else understands that.”

Wow. That’s some heavy meta-empathetic mind candy to lay on a 16-year-old kid who is still two years away from needing a shave. But that idea became a massive driver in my life, both on the page and off it. The concept that very few, if any people, see their own actions as truly evil is frightening and powerful. It doesn’t excuse their actions, of course, but it does create more depth of understanding that goes beyond simply dividing the world into dark and light, wrong and right.

So how do you build a great villain, especially in the middle grade literature space? You simply give them everything you give your heroes… and maybe a bit more.

  • What is their origin story? Every hero has one—being bitten by a radioactive spider or being raised by awful parents who don’t recognize their daughter’s brilliance and abilities-- but then again, so should every villain. And that origin story isn’t just about how they gained powers or became special. It needs to be about what put them on a path to believing they were right and everyone else was wrong. It could be about how they were mistreated and decided to never be a victim again, or it might be about how they were tricked into doing something unforgivable and then realized they’d been manipulated. The point is, as an author, you have to know how things started for them, even if it’s not included in the book, or else you aren’t writing a character. You’re creating a caricature.
  • What are their powers? There are all kinds of power; money, strength, cunning, persuasiveness, x-ray vision, stealth, perceptiveness and a thousand others. The thing is, power itself is neither good nor bad. Only the use of those powers can have that kind of judgment attached to it. So regardless of whether you’re writing a super-villain in a sci-fi adventure or a bullying antagonist in a contemporary novel, give your antagonist a specific skillset that they could have possibly used in kind, benevolent ways under other circumstances.
  • What is their motivation? Even if a villain wants to destroy half the universe – see Thanos in the MCU—that isn’t their motivation. That’s the action they’re willing to achieve their goal. Their motivation is what they believe to be true. Thanos believed that overpopulation of the galaxy would lead to wars and tragedies that could eradicate all life if left unchecked. In Percy Jackson and the Olympians: The Lightning Thief, it turns out that Luke, a son of Mercury and ostensibly one of Percy’s friends, is actually trying to create war among the gods of Olympus so that Kronos can return. But Luke’s motivation isn’t any of that. He just wants revenge upon his neglectful father and feels powerless to get it any other way. And even in my debut, the nearly immortal Necros makes it clear that more than world domination, she wants to free superhumans from being controlled by MASC (the Multinational Authority for Superhuman Control). Why? Because they turned her into a villain because of her life-stealing powers. What does your villain want and why?
  • What is their weakness? If Superman wasn’t weakened by Kryptonite, he’d be the least interesting hero ever created because he’d be boringly perfect. The same goes for your villains. They have to have a weakness, though it doesn’t need to be something magical or super-rare. Pride can be a weakness, allowing your villain to be distracted or even tricked. Distrust is always a strong weakness for a villain because if they are underhanded and dangerous, they likely assume everyone else is too. The key is to make sure their weakness is somehow attached to the origin and motivation.

It may seem formulaic, but like any other checklist, it’s just a framework to make sure you’ve done your “chores” along the way. Because if you can answer all those questions as an author, that’s when your villain stops being just a plot device created to give your hero something to do. Instead, they become the hero of their own story, and for the reader, things get a lot more interesting.

Shawn Peters has written professionally for television and advertising for more than two decades. His debut middle grade novel, “The Unforgettable Logan Foster,” was published by HarperCollins in January 2022. The highly anticipated sequel, “The Unforgettable Logan Foster and the Shadow of Doubt,” was released on January 3, 2023. Shawn is married to a super­hero public school teacher and is also a father of two kids who are now both too old for his books or his jokes. Basically, he’s a suburban-dad trope-fest. After years of coaching his kids’ teams and playing old-man softball, he now spends his spare time jogging slowly, comparing IPAs with other dads, and making ultra-nerdy Dungeons and Dragons puns. Follow him @shawntweeters on Twitter and IG, or check-in for upcoming events and school visits at www.ShawnPetersWrites.com

Giveaway Details

Shawn is generously offering a hardback of The Unforgettable Logan Foster or The Unforgettable Logan Foster and the Shadow of Doubt, winner’s choice, for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by February 25th. If your e-mail is not on your Google Profile, you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address.

If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog and/or follow me on Twitter or Shawn on his social media sites, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. This book giveaway is U.S. and Canada.

Marvelous Middle Grade Monday is hosted by Greg Pattridge. You can find the participating blogs on his blog.

Upcoming Interviews and Guest Posts

Thursday, February 16 I’m participating in the Wish Big Giveaway Hop

Monday, February 20 I have an agent spotlight interview with Lori Steel and a query critique giveaway

Wednesday, March 1 I have an interview with debut author Jenna Voris and a giveaway of her YA sci-fi Made of Stars and my IWSG Post

Thursday, March 2 I’m participating in the For the Love of Reading Giveaway Hop

Monday, March 6 I have an agent/author guest post by Lizz Nagle and J.A. Nielsen and a giveaway of J.A.’s YA fantasy The Claiming and a query critique giveaway by Lizz

Monday, March 13, I have an agent/author guest post by Sara Crow and Maria Jose Fitzgerald and a giveaway of Maria’s MG contemporary mystery Turtles of the Midnight Moon and a query critique giveaway by Sara

Monday, March 20 I have an agent spotlight interview with Kristen Terrette and a query critique giveaway

Hope to see you on Thursday!