Happy Monday Everyone! Hope those of you in the Midwest and East survived the snow yesterday. I got to Planet Fitness before it really started coming down. And I also survived my first exercise class in 17+ years on Saturday.
FOLLOWER NEWS
Donna Weaver has a new e-book, A SEASON OF CHANGE, releasing on February 6th. Here's a blurb:
It’s a time of change for Jori Virtanen. The former playboy model
is about to be married. He juggles wedding arrangements, a bachelor
party, and plans for keeping the ceremony secret from the press. But
Jori has another problem. He has to figure out how to tell one of his
best friends, Marc North, that his girlfriend may not be what she
appears.This ebook-exclusive short story includes an excerpt from Swing Vote, Safe Harbors #3. Here's a link where you can order it now:
And Tyrean Martinson's new e-book, ASHES BURN SEASON 1, was recently released. Here's a blurb:
Fantasy, intrigue, and adventure in 30 episodes of hint fiction. Ashes Burn Season 1: Ashes Away follows the lives of Wend, Teresa, and King Bryant as they flee from their past. And here's a few links:
And I have a winner to announce.
The winner of BANNEKER BONES AND THE GIANT ROBOT BEES is Patchi!
And the winner of THE INQUISITOR'S MARK is Peaches Ledwidge!
Congrats! E-mail me your addresses so I can have your books sent to you. Please e-mail me by the end of Wednesday or I'll have to pick another winner.
Today
I’m excited to have debut author MarcyKate Connolly here to share about
her new MG novel MONSTROUS that releases next Tuesday. It’s based on
Frankenstein and the Grimm stories. I really sympathized with Kymera,
who had to hide her real self because she looked different from everyone
else, but was such a kind and good person inside. I’m a sucker for
these types of characters.
Here’s a blurb from
Goodreads:
The city of Bryre
suffers under the magic of an evil wizard. Because of his curse, girls
sicken and disappear without a trace, and Bryre’s inhabitants live in
fear. No one is allowed outside after dark.
Yet night is the only
time that Kymera can enter this dangerous city, for she must not be
seen by humans. Her father says they would not understand her wings, the
bolts in her neck, or her spiky tail—they would kill her. They would
not understand that she was created for a purpose: to rescue the girls
of Bryre.
Despite her caution, a boy named Ren sees Kym and
begins to leave a perfect red rose for her every evening. As they become
friends, Kym learns that Ren knows about the missing girls, the wizard,
and the evil magic that haunts Bryre.
And what he knows will change Kym’s life.
Hi MarcyKate! Thanks so much for joining us.
1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer.
I
never really thought of myself as a writer until my late 20s. I was
always a great reader and I wrote a lot of poetry in junior high and
high school, but I never really tried a big project until college when I
wrote an opera as the equivalent of my senior thesis. (I went to
Hampshire College in Western Massachusetts and they give written
evaluations instead of grades there.) I still focused on music for a few
years after that, but I began to realize what I loved most about music
is that it can tell a story. That got me back into writing, and finally I
decided that if I can write a 2-hour opera, I should be able to write
an entire novel. So I did, and I haven’t really looked back.
2.
Oh, yeah. If you can write a 2-hour opera, I think you can definitely
be a writer. I can't even imagine doing that. Where did you get the idea
for MONSTROUS?
I’d wanted to write something that
involved fairy tales and the Brothers Grimm for a couple years before
this particular idea hit me. And when it hit, I was stuck in gridlock
traffic during rush hour on the way to Boston for dinner with some
friends. It was just the first line – “I will never forget my first
breath” – that fell into my head and made the gears start spinning. Who
would say that? Why would they say that? Where are they? And suddenly I
had the whole first page in my head. I had to jot it down on my iPhone
so I wouldn’t forget! I was so taken with the image of this girl just
waking up as a monster that I was very distracted the rest of the
evening out and kept jotting down possible plot elements on my phone
every few minutes. As soon as I got home that evening, I sat down and
wrote the first few pages of the book. The funny thing is, that first
page has barely changed since the initial spark of inspiration. I added
the last line of it later on, but otherwise, it’s exactly the same.
3.
Maybe we should all appreciate being stuck in those traffic jams more.
Amazing how you nailed the first page the first time. So many of us
struggle with that.
I’ve read a guest post where
you describe this as “your little weird story.” Why do you describe it
that way and what did you find challenging in writing it? What did you
learn from this?
Monstrous is my “weird little book” because it was hands down the most rule-breaking manuscript I’d
ever
written, with a protagonist who has wings, a tail, and cat’s eyes and
claws. She wakes up and falls asleep 3 or 4 times in the first few pages
too, which if you read writing rules is supposed to be a huge no-no
(but it worked for this particular story, oddly enough!).
I
never thought it would go anywhere – it was a story I began writing
just for myself and to distract me from the query process with the book
before it. I was so protective of Monstrous that it took me months to
send it out to my critique partners. I was so afraid no one else would
love the book like I did and that it was too strange to succeed. (Turns
out, strange was just what I needed!) I revised and tinkered with it
obsessively for months and it wasn’t until my critique partners
basically told me, you’re being silly, just send it out already, that I
finally did.
Because I was writing it for me, the first
few drafts were actually quite freeing. It was my 7th novel, so I’d
learned the writing “rules” well enough, but decided that some needed to
be broken because it made sense for this character to behave that way. I
also divided the story into “days” instead of chapters, which was a big
challenge (and something I will never do again – it’s a logistical
nightmare during revision!). My big takeaway from the process of writing
this book was twofold: 1) first and foremost write what you love, even
if it seems too strange or crazy to be publishable – it might be just
the thing that sets it apart enough to make it. And 2) learn the writing
rules and why they’re rules (largely because people use those things as
crutches or easy fixes, not to move the plot forward), and then you’ll
have a better understanding of when breaking them can work.
4.
Those are great tips. Even though others could perceive Kymera as a
monster, she really is a sympathetic character. Share a bit about her
and her character development.
Kymera is probably
my all-time favorite character I ever written. Her development went
through a lot of work during the editing process with HarperCollins
because while I initially thought the book was YA, it was bought as MG
(and rightfully so – best thing to ever happen to it!). She starts out
very naïve since she literally wakes up in a new monstrous form at the
beginning of the book with no recollection of who she was before. She
has to relearn a lot of things, and her father trains her to help save
the girls of a nearby city who have been going missing. She has this
literal learning curve where she has to go from zero to hero. It’s
gradual over the first half of the book, however, there’s a big twist
near the middle that changes everything and forces her to grow up fast.
In early drafts this is where the book went from MG to YA, and during
revisions with my editor, we aged down some of the more mature themes
and evened out her voice so the shift was more believable and less
dramatic. It was a lot of work to smooth out her character arc, but I’m
very pleased with the result!
5. You're not the
first person who I've heard has seen their story as YA but when they
start working with an agent or editor realize it works better as a MG
story. I’ve read you’re a total plotter who uses outlines in writing
your stories. What’s your plotting process like?
It
mostly consists of me sitting in my writing cave, fingers steepled,
spinning in my chair, and cackling. (Kidding! Sort of…). Seriously
though, I have a folder full of potential book ideas, some more fleshed
out than others. When I first get the spark of an idea that really grabs
me, I almost immediately begin brainstorming and jotting down notes
about who the main character is, potential plots, setting, fun details,
etc. The best ideas are usually a character with a problem and the
inciting incident. When I’m ready to add a project to my queue, I’ll go
over my notes and plot out the story using a beat sheet (from Blake
Snyder’s Save the Cat). I find this helpful for two reasons: 1) it keeps
my plot focused and 2) I don’t have to plot in order. I can know
something cool happens toward the end and work on that, then later go
back and figure out how the heck they got there. (I never write in order
either). This gives me a roadmap to draft with, but that doesn’t mean I
stick to it religiously. My characters almost always decide to do
something that surprises me and then I go back to the beat sheet and
reassess the plot based on the potential consequences of those actions.
(Consequences are my favorite :D)
Added bonus: having a
beat sheet prepared is also very useful when it comes time to write a
synopsis. Everything you need is already there -- you can just flesh out
the details and polish the writing!
6. I need to go back and read his book. I’ve also read that you love Scrivener. Why?
I’m
a HUGE fan of Scrivener. It completely revolutionized my writing life. I
used to have to have a ridiculous amount of documents open when writing
– beat sheet, outline, browser tabs for research, etc – and now I only
need one. Scrivener is a very powerful, versatile piece of software.
There are tons of features. It’s easy to get overwhelmed when you first
try it, and I found that tends to be when a lot of people drop off.
There’s seems to be a fair amount of guilt about not using all the
features, but honestly I don’t know anyone who does. One of the
wonderful things about Scrivener is that it has all these features
because humans have different ways of thinking, especially creative
types. It’s built so you can customize it to create a process that works
best for you and your brain and writing style. For example, there’s a
corkboard feature that many people swear by, but I’ve never really found
it useful for me. It’s fun to look at, but I’m more of an outliner, so I
use that instead. I can input my beats or outline and have all kinds of
notes and comments at my fingertips. I can import word docs from my
critique partners along with their notes, too. There’s a keyword feature
that lets you track themes and plot points, a name generator – I could
wax poetic about Scrivener for hours, but you get the idea!
Basically, I love that it keeps me organized and that it’s flexible so I can customize it to fit my own ideal process.
7.
Good to know you don't have to learn all its features. Suzie Townsend
is your agent. Share how she became your agent and your road to
publication.
Monstrous
was the 7th novel I wrote, and the 4th I queried. I queried those 3
other books for a combined total of about 3.5 years. I sent well over
300 queries and got hundreds of No in response. The book I queried right
before Monstrous had a huge request rate, and the fact that I kept
getting rejections in response had me at a very low point and I almost
didn’t query Monstrous at all. However, I entered a blog contest (the
very first Writer’s Voice contest back in 2012) and the outpouring of
writerly love for my first page and query letter from other writers and
the judges was exactly the push I needed (in addition to my crit
partners telling me I needed to query it!). I started querying all the
agents on my A list (usually in the middle of the night when I was
feeling brave), and got a great response. I had my first offer on
Monstrous in about six weeks. I nudged all the agents currently reading
the book and anyone I had queried who hadn’t responded yet. Suzie
Townsend was in the latter group – she responded right away to my nudge
with a request for the full, read it in 24 hours, and set up a call for
the next business day. I did get a 3rd offer as well, but Suzie really
impressed me with her enthusiasm for the book and her vision for it
matched mine perfectly.
After I signed with her, we did
some light revisions and then went on sub after Labor Day. She sent out
the manuscript on a Thursday, and by Monday we had interest from a
couple publishers and then an offer on Friday. She sold my book in 8
days, which after years and hundreds of No was pretty amazing!
8.
Your story is a great reminder of the importance of not giving up. And
awesome that your book sold so quickly. How are you planning to market
your book? How has being part of a debut author group helped you in
planning marketing and in the year leading up to your book release?
I’m
fortunate that the majority of the actual marketing work is being done
by my publisher. However, I’m doing guest posts and interviews, a
mailing to local libraries and bookstores, swag giveaways, things like
that. I’ve also been reaching out to local libraries and getting to know
my local bookstores.
I’m part of two debut groups –
the Fearless Fifteeners and Class of 2K15. Both have been (and will be!)
very useful in navigating the debut year. The Fearless Fifteeners is a
larger group and they are fantastic for helping each other out behind
the scenes and generally making you feel like you’re not alone in going a
bit crazy. There’s a fabulous sense of camaraderie and they also do a
lot of consistent social media outreach and promotion for their members
which is great.
The Class of 2K15 is a little
different. While the Fearless Fifteeners is free and relies on social
media for outreach, 2K15 has a membership fee to join and it’s limited
to only 20 books. We pool those funds to create a professional website,
and do more material marketing such as print mailings and ads in
professional publications. We also have committees dedicated to social
media planning and events – past classes have had panels at ALA and
SCBWI, and we hope to follow in their footsteps!
In
short, debut groups are excellent sources of support and can also be an
excellent way to get your name and book in front of a wider audience of
people. I highly recommend them!
9. Yes, I think you're right that joining debut groups are extremely helpful. What are you working on now?
Too
many projects! I’m putting the final touches on my next book, another
middle grade fantasy that will be out from HarperCollins in Winter 2016.
I’m also currently revising several projects that will hopefully go on
sub at some point including a YA contemporary novel and a YA fantasy.
And I have several other books in the idea and first draft stage, too!
Thank you so much for having me on your blog!
Thanks for sharing all your advice, MarcyKate. You can find MarcyKate at:
MarcyKate generously offered a copy of MONSTROUS for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower
(just click the follow button if you’re not a follower) and leave a
comment through February 14th. I’ll announce the winner on February 16th.
If your e-mail is not on your Google Profile, please leave it in the comments.
If
you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog, mention
this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry.This is for for
US and Canada.
Marvelous Middle Grade Monday was started by Shannon Messenger. You can find all the other participating blogs on her
blog.
Here's what's coming up:
On Wednesday I'll be reviewing Jennifer Nielsen's new MG
mythology/fantasy MARK OF THE THIEF and giving away my ARC. Jennifer is
one of my favorite authors and I loved this start to her new series.
Next Monday I'll have an interview with debut author Laurie McKay and a giveaway of her MG fantasy THE LAST DRAGON CHARMER.
The next Monday I have an interview with debut author Rhiannon Thomas
and a giveaway of her YA fairy tale retelling A WICKED THING.
The Monday after that I have a guest post by debut author Karen Bao and a giveaway of her science fiction YA DOVE ARISING.
Hope to see you on Monday!
