Upcoming Agent Spotlight Interviews & Guest Posts

  • Ashlee MacCallum Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 9/10/2025
  • Renee Runge Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 10/6/2025
  • Sophie Sheumaker Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 10/15/2025
  • Mara Cobb Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/12/2025
  • Carter Hasegawa Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/19/2025

Agent Spotlight & Agent Spotlight Updates

  • Agent Spotlights & Interviews were all edited in 2021. Every year since then, I update some of them. I also regularly add information regarding changes in their agency as I find it. I have been updated through the letter "N" as of 1/26/2024 and many have been reviewed by the agents. Look for more information as I find the time to update more agent spotlights.

On Writing a Book a Year and Increasing Your Instagram Followers: Interview With June Hur and A Crane Among Wolves Giveaway and IWSG Post

Happy Wednesday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have author June Hur here to share about her YA historical A Crane Among Wolves. I interviewed June when she was a debut author in 2020, and you can read her interview here. A Crane Among Wolves is based on a true story in Korean history, and I’m excited to read it.

Here’s a blurb from Goodreads:

June Hur, bestselling author of The Red Palace, crafts a devastating and pulse-pounding tale that will feel all-too-relevant in today’s world, based on a true story from Korean history.

Hope is dangerous. Love is deadly.

1506, Joseon. The people suffer under the cruel reign of the tyrant King Yeonsan, powerless to stop him from commandeering their land for his recreational use, banning and burning books, and kidnapping and horrifically abusing women and girls as his personal playthings.

Seventeen-year-old Iseul has lived a sheltered, privileged life despite the kingdom’s turmoil. When her older sister, Suyeon, becomes the king’s latest prey, Iseul leaves the relative safety of her village, traveling through forbidden territory to reach the capital in hopes of stealing her sister back. But she soon discovers the king’s power is absolute, and to challenge his rule is to court certain death.

Prince Daehyun has lived his whole life in the terrifying shadow of his despicable half-brother, the king. Forced to watch King Yeonsan flaunt his predation through executions and rampant abuse of the common folk, Daehyun aches to find a way to dethrone his half-brother once and for all. When staging a coup, failure is fatal, and he’ll need help to pull it off—but there’s no way to know who he can trust.

When Iseul's and Daehyun's fates collide, their contempt for each other is transcended only by their mutual hate for the king. Armed with Iseul’s family connections and Daehyun’s royal access, they reluctantly join forces to launch the riskiest gamble the kingdom has ever

Save her sister. Free the people. Destroy a tyrant.

 


Before I get to June’s interview post, I have my IWSG post.

Posting: The first Wednesday is officially Insecure Writer's Support Group Day.

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!

The awesome co-hosts this month are:  Liza at Middle Passages, Shannon Lawrence, Melissa Maygrove, and Olga Godim!

Optional Question: In this constantly evolving industry, what kind of offering/service do you think the IWSG should consider offering to members?

I think the IWSG is doing a good job helping members. The group offers help to writers and authors whatever their publishing path is. The X pitch contest is really helpful for writers trying to get an agent.

One wish I have is that we could encourage more of our members to blog regularly, at least on the first Wednesday of the month, and follow the guidelines to visit bloggers who read their posts and comment. And to do so when they post during the month, and others stop by to support them. I comment on way more people’s posts than I receive comments from. It’s time-consuming and discouraging.

Another helpful resource would be to provide new marketing ideas for authors, such as good blog tour companies, to help them market their books to new audiences. I think that's a struggle for many traditional, indie, and self-published authors. Maybe one of our monthly questions could be to suggest ideas and then add them to the mareting page on the IWSG website. 

I’d also like our group to grow. It’s shrunk a lot over the years. If we could get members to see that blogging only one day a month, which is all many members blog, is not that much of a burden for the benefit of being part of a supportive group of writers and making much deeper friendships than we can on other social media sites.

Interview With June Hur

Hi June! Thanks so much for joining us.

1. Where did you get the idea for A Crane Among Wolves and what is the true story it’s based on?

While researching for my previous book, I came across an article about King Yeonsan, a real Korean tyrant who kidnapped over 1,000 women with a dream of “owning” 10,000 by the end of his reign. This king also banned literacy in an attempt to censor people from writing slanders about him. I was horrified by the atrocities King Yeonsan committed, and also curious to learn about what happened to those 1,000 captured women. This interest is what initially sparked the idea for my books.

2. What research did you do in creating your story both in terms of the true story A Crane Among Wolves is based on and Korea in the 1500s?

I research extensively, relying on scholarly sources that I manage to find through Jstor or through googlebooks. I also rely on Korean sources, lectures, alongside the Daily Records of Yeonsangun, a primary source about the king’s reign.

3. Yes, it sounds like you did intensive research for your story. Share a bit about Iseul and Prince Daehyun as characters. Do you have a favorite?

Iseul may initially appear unlikeable due to her selfish and spoiled nature, but as the story unfolds, she undergoes a transformation, showing a newfound maturity and genuine care for others. As for Prince Daehyun, the half-brother of the tyrant king, he wrestles with the trauma of living in the tyrant’s shadow by shutting away his emotions. But his encounter with Iseul sparks a journey of self-discovery and purpose. My favorite character is definitely Prince Daehyun!

Your Writing Process and How You Are Able to Write a Book a Year

4. Are you a plotter, pantser, or a combination of them? How has your writing process changed since you wrote your debut book The Silence of Bones was released?

I used to be an intense plotter. I’d have every chapter broken down into outlines before I even began writing. But now I’m a combination. Now I use a beat sheet to write out a loose outline, to have some kind of goal post to guide me as I pants-write.

 5. I’m a combination writer, too. It’s good to know that this works for writing manuscripts fairly fast. What’s your writing schedule like? Has it changed over the years?

It has most definitely changed! I used to have whole days to write, but these days I usually only have two hours. I write every day after I put my kids to sleep, and that’s when I get most of my work done. I sometimes write when my son naps (and my daughter is in school), but not always.

6. It’s reassuring to know that you can be so productive in two hours every day. Since the Silence of Bones was released, you’ve had three books published: Forest of Stolen Girls in 2021, The Red Palace in 2022, and A Crane Among Wolves this year. And you have another book, Adoration, scheduled to be released in 2026. How long did it take you to write these manuscripts and what are your tips on finishing manuscripts at a faster pace like you have once your debut book was released?

For THE FOREST OF STOLEN GIRLS and THE RED PALACE, I was under a one year contract, meaning I’d only have around six months to draft, followed by multiple rounds of revisions. I’ve found that to write fast, I need to get my first draft written quickly, as that becomes a foundation to build on. One method I rely on is to use an aesthetically unappealing font, like comic sans, as the font constantly reminds me that the purpose of a first draft is to just have fun, it doesn’t need to be perfect. I also rely heavily on beat sheets, as following a clear story structure early on saves me the time I might have spent rewriting.

I’ve found, though, that my creativity burnt out really fast from writing a book a year. So I slowed down to one book every two years with CRANE and ADORATION.

Your Journey to Publication

7. Your second book was part of a two-book contract with your debut book. What has been the process for getting your next three books published?

For THE RED PALACE and A CRANE AMONG WOLVES, my agent sold the book in a one-book contract to my editor at Feiwel and Friends based on a proposal (basically a synopsis + the first few pages). But because I’ve established a really amazing working relationship with my editor, and want to continue working with her, my agent and I recently proposed a two-book deal, which turned into a six-figure book contract. So my fifth book, ADORATION, is actually part of that two-book deal.

8. Congrats on your publishing success. What advice do you have for other authors about continuing to get publishing contracts after their initial contract?


My tip is pretty straightforward: Be kind and respectful to your editor and your publishing team. Try to meet the deadlines. At the same time, I think it’s also important to note that if your publishing team isn’t supportive of your book or career, it’s never a bad idea to shop the book around to find a new home. 

Promoting Your Book

8. How are you planning to promote A Crane Among Wolves? How have your marketing plans for your books changed since your debut book was released?

Initially, I focused on promoting my debut book through Twitter, but I rarely touch twitter these days. Instead, I've shifted my marketing efforts to Instagram reels, and it's been a great way to engage with both existing and new readers. Interestingly enough, I haven't had the same level of success on TikTok despite sharing identical content on both platforms. It's been quite a contrast, with some of my TikTok videos barely reaching 1k views, while on reels, they've gone viral, hitting over 1 million views.

9. You have 55.4K followers on Instagram. How did you reach so many followers? What’s your advice to other writers and authors who want to increase their followers on Instagram?

My key advice is to diversify your content beyond just promoting your book. I've noticed that my reels focused solely on book promotion tend to receive the lowest engagement. Instead, the majority of my followers are drawn to the Korean history content I share. So while it's important to promote your book, I think it’s also important to find a niche related to your book but distinct from it. By catering to a broader audience interested in this general topic, you not only expand your follower base but also increase the likelihood that they'll develop an interest in your book over time.

10. That’s great advice. What are you working on now?

The next book I'm working on is a YA historical romance titled "Adoration," which is slated for a 2026 release. This Jane Austen homage set during the joseon dynasty follows a young woman transcribing forbidden books and an aloof, wealthy young man hiding his own literary secret, who must wrestle with questions of class, respectability, and carving out one's own destiny when a literary censor at the Ministry of Justice uncovers her secret and their connection. After this book, however, I'm hoping to write another dark historical/thriller again.

Thanks for sharing all your advice, June. You can find June at @junehwrites on tiktok and Instagram

Giveaway Details

June’s publisher is generously offering a hardback of A Crane Among Wolves for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by June 15th. If your email is not on your Google Profile, you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address.

If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog and/or follow me on Twitter or follow June on her social media sites, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. This book giveaway is U.S.

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

Monday, June 10th I have an agent spotlight interview with Jenna Satterthwaite and a query critique giveaway

Sunday, June 16th I’m participating in the Dad-o-mite Giveaway Hop

Monday, June 17th I have an interview with debut author Leah Stecher and a giveaway of her MG magical realism The Things We Miss

Monday, June 22nd I have a guest post by author M.R. Fournet and a giveaway of her MG fantasy Darkness & Demon Song

Wednesday, June 24th I have an agent spotlight interview with Bethany Weaver and query critique giveaway 

Monday, July 1st I’m participating in the Sparkle Time Giveaway Hop

Wednesday, July 3rd I have an interview with debut author Amber Chen and a giveaway of her YA mystery fantasy Of Jade and Dragons and my IWSG post

Monday, July 8th I have an agent spotlight interview with Rebecca Williamson and a query critique giveaway

I hope to see you on Monday!

Berry Good Giveaway Hop

 

Happy Saturday, Everyone! Today, I'm excited to participate in the Berry Good Giveaway Hop hosted by MamatheFox. I hope you're having a good summer. Mine is going great. I just finished producing a play for a community theater group I'm on the board of. I'm enjoying the freedom of not having to solve problems and being stress-free. My vegetable and flower gardens are already planted, and I'm looking forward to taking care of them, spending time with friends and family, and reading more this summer. What about you?

Book of Your Choice or Amazon Gift Card Giveaway

I’ve got a lot of exciting newly released MG and YA book choices this month that you might like. You can also choose another book in the series by these authors or a book of your choice. You can find descriptions of these books on Goodreads. Here are your choices:















If you haven't found a book you want, you can win a $10 Amazon Gift Card.

 


Giveaway Details

To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by June 15th telling me whether you want a book, and if so, which one, or the Amazon gift card and your email address. Be sure to include your email address.


If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or other social media sites and/or follow me on Twitter, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. The book giveaway is U.S. only and the Amazon gift card giveaway is International.

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

Wednesday, June 5th I have an interview with author June Hur and a giveaway of her YA historical A Crane Among Wolves and my IWSG post

Monday, June 10th I have an agent spotlight interview with Jenna Satterthwaite and a query critique giveaway

Sunday, June 16th I’m participating in the Dad-o-mite Giveaway Hop

Monday, June 17th I have an interview with debut author Leah Stecher and a giveaway of her MG magical realism The Things We Miss

Monday,  June 22nd I have a guest post by author M.R. Fournet and a giveaway of her MG fantasy Darkness & Demon Song

Wednesday, June 24th I have an agent spotlight interview and query critique giveaway with Bethany Weaver

Monday, July 1st I’m participating in the Sparkle Time Giveawyhop

Wednesday, July 3rd I have an interview with debut author Amber Chen and a giveaway of her YA mystery fantasy Of Jade and Dragons and my IWSG post

Monday, July 8th I have an agent spotlight interview with Rebecca Williamson and a query critique giveaway

I hope to see you on Wednesday!

And here are all the other blogs participating in this blog hop:

MamatheFox and all participating blogs are not held responsible for sponsors who fail to fulfill their prize obligations.

Literary Agent Interview: Caroline Trussell Interview and Query Critique Giveaway

Today I’m thrilled to have agent Caroline Trussell here. She’s a junior literary agent at Metamorphosis Literary Agency.

Hi Caroline! Thanks so much for joining us.

About Caroline:

1. Tell us how you became an agent, how long you’ve been one, and what you’ve been doing as an agent.


My journey to becoming an agent was a bit of a long one but I’m so glad I’m here. I realized I wanted to be in publishing around 2019 and worked very hard to procure an internship either with a publishing house or an agency. In early 2020, I cold emailed a ton of agencies and I wound up having the opportunity to be an assistant for the Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency and I learned a lot about reader’s reports and evaluating manuscripts based on agent’s wants.

In 2021, I attended the Columbia Publishing Course, which taught me so much about publishing and the different areas you can work within and I really knew from that experience that I wanted to be an agent.

In 2022, I served as a reader for the Bent Agency, which I loved doing. Reading and evaluating manuscripts will always be one of my favorite parts of being an agent.  Finally, towards the middle of 2022, I became an intern at my current agency, Metamorphosis Literary Agency, and I was mentored by the amazing Amy Brewer until I became an agent in late December 2022.

As a newer agent, I’ve been really focused on working with my current authors to find the right editors for them and making sure their stories are the best they can be. I’ve also been prioritizing using platforms to talk about publishing topics to help authors learn more and to be transparent and open about what agenting and publishing involves.   

About the Agency:

2. Share a bit about your agency and what it offers to its authors.

Metamorphosis Literary is a very close-knit agency. It’s one of the reasons I was so happy to become an agent here. We have a very collaborative approach and are willing to help each other with industry information and answer any questions between agents.

Just like most agencies, we offer representation for authors, including dealing with subsidiary rights (audio, film, TV, etc.) but what I like to think we offer that’s unique is a tailored experience to each author, ensuring that they are comfortable, at ease, and feel empowered.

What She’s Looking For:

3. What age groups do you represent—picture books, MG, and/or YA? What genres do you represent and what are you looking for in submissions for these genres?

Right now, I represent mostly children’s books and YA is my ultimate favorite age group to work with. Fantasy in any genre is what I enjoy working with most, but what I find most important in stories is representation- whether it’s chronic illness rep, stories written by BIPOC or LGBTQ authors, or especially mental health representation. Mental health is a topic near and dear to my heart and I want to see stories with protagonists that deal with mental health from day to day and still get what they want.

However, what I’m currently looking for is different than what I represent right now, as I’m seeking to acquire other genres and age groups. I would really love to see a quirky romcom, a gripping thriller, a heart racing horror, or a fantasy that has setting as a character- all of these I am looking for in the adult space. 

4.  Is there anything you would be especially excited to seeing in the genres you are interested in?

Personally, it would be amazing if someone had a psychological thriller akin to THE SILENT PATIENT or SHUTTER ISLAND. I love thrillers that play on ‘is this real or all in my head’ and ‘is this person going down the rabbit hole or is everything actually crazy and they’re right?’

What She Isn’t Looking For:

5. What types of submissions are you not interested in?

I’m not currently representing any kind of nonfiction. Although, someday I would love to take on memoirs and narrative nonfiction, I don’t have the capacity as of yet. I tend to shy away from historical fiction and cop procedural type of mysteries.

In any genre, if there are triggers such as suicide, self-harm, alcoholism, or abuse, I can’t take those stories on.

Agent Philosophy:

6. What is your philosophy as an agent both in terms of the authors you want to work with and the books you want to represent?

My philosophy is that I hope to have a lifelong or as long as possible partnership with my authors. I genuinely want them to become the best writers they can be and to publish as many books as they want to. I am very accessible and open with my authors and I share a lot of submission information and processes with them because, as an author myself, I would want the same transparency.

When signing authors, I look for if our communication styles match because this is something that can make or break a relationship and being an author and agent is a type of relationship- it’s a partnership for years. I also try to weed out if the person is kind, if they’re passionate, if they’re willing to take constructive criticism and if they have other story ideas besides the manuscript I would sign them for.

Editorial Agent:

7. Are you an editorial agent? If so, what is your process like when you’re working with your authors before submitting to editors?

ABSOLUTELY. My favorite part of being an agent is diving into manuscripts and providing editorial feedback. I love honing my authors’ stories to help them shine and to make their already amazing stories the best they can possibly be.

Before submitting to editors, I’ll work with my authors by taking another look at their manuscript and seeing if there are any scenes or areas that need to be developed more, any line edits that need to be done, or any character arcs that need to be reevaluated, among other things. Depending on where the story is, sometimes I will only need to look at the manuscript once before going on submission and other times it may be a few back-and-forth rounds of edits.

But my ultimate goal is to make sure that the author’s vision is kept intact and that their story is in its best shape before we send it out on submission.

As a side note, I love editing so much that I also have an editorial service, Tru Story Editing, and will be reopening this month to query packages and first three chapter evaluations.

Query Methods and Submission Guidelines: (Always verify before submitting)

8. How should authors query you and what do you want to see with the query letter?

Authors can query me through my QueryManager link: https://QueryManager.com/carolinejtrussell

Within the query letter, I don’t have particular preferences but I do like to see a strong hook, what the stakes are for the main character/what will happen if those stakes aren’t met, and comparative titles as well as the genre, age group, title of the book, and word count of the manuscript. 

9.  Do you have any specific dislikes in query letters or the first pages submitted to you?

If the author spends most of the query letter stating their accomplishments, it gives me a sense that they are selling themselves and not their writing. Don’t get me wrong, it is very important to include an author bio so that I can get a sense of your experience with writing and any previous publications but the query letter, to me, is to sell your book first and foremost.

Response Time:

10. What’s your response time to queries and requests for more pages of a manuscript?

I try to respond to authors as quickly as I can. I don’t enjoy keeping people waiting and, if I have the capacity, sometimes authors will even get a response within a few days or a week.

I generally know what I am looking for in a query letter and opening pages and can quickly tell if the material is something I believe I could take on and be passionate about. As far as full manuscript requests, I normally have the same time frame as sending rejections- anywhere between a few days and a week.

When I request a full, I try to take my time in reading and evaluating the story. If I’ve requested a full, I see a lot of potential in it, but I have to ask myself if I feel that the material is sellable, if it’s strongly written and developed, and if the plot is engaging. Of course, I’m not expecting stories to be perfect and ready to go out on submission, though.

I’d say between 1-3 months is my normal response time for fulls. If I do not offer representation, I do my best to provide several points of critique and how the author could revise their story to make it stronger. 

Self-Published and Small Press Authors:

11.  Are you open to representing authors who have self-published or been published by smaller presses? What advice do you have for them if they want to try to find an agent to represent them?

Yes, of course. I think this shows that these authors have put a lot of effort into their writing and have what it takes to publish other stories. My advice is the same as to everyone, which is to have a strong query package, to do research on the agents they hope to submit to, make sure their story aligns with the agent’s wish list, and to never stop writing and believing in themselves.

Querying can oftentimes be a long and draining process and I advise all authors to remember to take care of themselves, to do what’s best for them, and to continue to have hope.

Clients:

12. Who are some of the authors you represent?

My current authors are Demri Redmon, Veronika Kiley, and Jessica Guest- who are all currently on submission.

Demri has written a gripping YA gothic horror that includes a haunted house and is centered around Edgar Allan Poe’s fictitious daughter as she fights to save her house and humanity.

Veronika has written an immersive YA fantasy with themes of one’s perceived destiny being ripped away from them only to be replaced by a more powerful one. It includes a unique take on Greek mythology and the zodiac and has lots of female empowerment, strong friendships, and amazing worldbuilding.

Jessica has written a very poignant middle grade story about a girl who is bullied for her weight but finds power and solace through poetry and who is gifted with a magical quill that allows her wishes to come true. However, she makes a huge mistake and has to right all of her wrongs before time runs out.

If any editors see this and are interested in reading the full manuscript of any of my authors’ work, please message me on X: @carolinejtrulit

Interviews and Guest Posts:

13. Please share the links to any interviews, guest posts, and podcasts you think would be helpful to writers interested in querying you.

I haven’t been featured in any podcasts or interviews yet besides this one, which I’m very grateful for, but I was on Demi Schwartz’s podcast, Literary Blend, this month to talk about Mental Health Awareness Month and how mental health plays into my strategy as an agent.

https://open.spotify.com/episode/7KfFWtB6KfI3O0ElmtAl4R?si=Jzhm10PrSIOOc1GvH2n_BQ

I also have a page on Manuscript Wishlist that authors may find helpful in learning more about me and my preferences: https://www.manuscriptwishlist.com/mswl-post/caroline-trussell/

Links and Contact Info:

14. Please share how writers should contact you to submit a query and your links on the Web.

Writers should use my QueryManager link to query me. That's the only way I accept submissions currently.

If authors would like to see what I’m up to, they can take a look at my social media and the Metamorphosis website. I also provide editorial services for authors who would like beta reading or query critiques.

Twitter/X- https://x.com/carolinejtrulit?s=21

TikTok- www.tiktok.com/@carolinejtrulit

Metamorphosis website- https://www.metamorphosisliteraryagency.com/submissions

Editorial Services- https://www.litagentcarolinetrussell.com/services-4

Additional Advice:

15. Is there any other advice you’d like to share with aspiring authors that we haven’t covered?

My advice would be to continue to hone your craft. Utilize beta readers, become friends with other writers, cheer each other on throughout this whole process of trying to get published. Secondly, prioritize your mental health and do what is best for you when it comes to how long you query, how many agents you query, and so forth.

At the end of the day, remember why you write and the stories you have inside you that need to be told.

Thanks for sharing all your advice, Caroline.

Giveaway Details

­Caroline is generously offering a query critique to one lucky winner. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment through June 1st. If your email is not on your Google Profile, you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. If you do not want to enter the contest, that’s okay. Just let me know in the comments.

If you follow me on Twitter or mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog, mention this in the comments, and I'll give you an extra entry. This is an international giveaway.

Have any experience with this agent? See something that needs updating? Please leave a comment or email me at natalieiaguirre7@gmail.com

Note: These agent profiles and interviews presently focus on agents who accept children's fiction. Please take the time to verify anything you might use here before querying an agent. The information found here is subject to change.

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

Saturday, June 1st I’m participating in the Berry Good Giveaway Hop

Wednesday, June 5th I have an interview with author June Hur and a giveaway of her YA historical A Crane Among Wolves and my IWSG post

Monday, June 10th I have an agent spotlight interview with Jenna Satterthwaite and a query critique giveaway

Sunday, June 16th I’m participating in the Dad-o-mite Giveaway Hop

Monday, June 17th I have an interview with debut author Leah Stecher and a giveaway of her MG magical realism The Things We Miss

Monday, June 24th I have an agent spotlight interview with Bethany Weaver and a query critique giveaway

I hope to see you on Sunday, June 1st!

 

Moms Rock Giveaway Hop



Happy Thursday Everyone! Today I'm excited to participate in the Moms Rock Giveaway Hop hosted by MamatheFox. Spring is definitely here, and I've been enjoying planting my vegetables and flowers. Normally, I'd hold off on planting the flowers, but we've had a really warm spring. I've been producing Glengarry Glen Ross for a community theatre group that I'm a board member of. Performances run through this weekend, and then I will thankfully be done with this job.  

Book of Your Choice or Amazon Gift Card

I am offering a book of your choice that is $20 or less on Amazon. I’m looking forward to seeing what books everyone is looking forward to reading. 

If you don’t have a book you want, you can win a $10 Amazon Gift Card.

Giveaway Details

To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by May 31st telling me whether you want a book, and if so, which one, or the Amazon gift card and your email address. Be sure to include your email address.

If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or other social media sites and/or follow me on Twitter, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. The book giveaway is U.S. only and the Amazon gift card giveaway is International.

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

Monday, May 20th I have an agent spotlight interview with Caroline Trussell and a query critique giveaway

Saturday, June 1st I’m participating in the Berry Good Giveaway Hop

Wednesday, June 5th I have an interview with author June Hur and a giveaway of her YA historical A Crane Among Wolves and my IWSG post

Monday, June 10th I have an agent spotlight interview with Jenna Satterthwaite and a query critique giveaway

Sunday, June 16th I’m participating in the Dad-o-mite Giveaway Hop

I hope to see you on Monday!

And here are all the other blogs participating in this blog hop:


MamatheFox and all participating blogs are not held responsible for sponsors who fail to fulfill their prize obligations.

How to Nail Your Query Letter by Rose Atkinson-Carter

Happy Wednesday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have Rose Atkinson-Carter, a writer with Reedsy, here to share her fantastic tips for nailing your query letter. I found her advice and examples very helpful. I hope you will too.

Now here’s Rose!

Query letters are sent to literary agents to assess their potential interest in representing your writing for publication. These agents receive hundreds of queries, but they only select a few authors for representation each year. That’s why mastering the art of crafting a compelling query letter is crucial for aspiring authors.

But don’t worry, you won’t be penning another epic. Although each literary agency has its own requirements, most query letters aren’t expected to be longer than 400 words. With that said, here are 5 necessary steps to nail your query letter and entice any literary agent.

Start with a strong “hook”

In the same way that most successful books start with a strong hook, your query letter needs to compel literary agents to keep reading! In addition to a greeting or salutation to your letter’s recipient, the beginning of your query letter should include a short description that gives agents an overview of your book’s concept.

Before expanding into a successful movie franchise, Michael Crichton’s novel Jurassic Park was an instant bestseller with a powerful and intriguing hook: 

An astonishing technique for recovering and cloning dinosaur DNA has been discovered. Now humankind’s most thrilling fantasies have come true. Creatures extinct for eons roam Jurassic Park with their awesome presence and profound mystery, and all the world can visit them—for a price. 

Until something goes wrong. . . . 

From this example, the literary agent immediately sees the unique premise of a park filled with dinosaurs and a deadly challenge to overcome. Your hook doesn't necessarily need to show danger or action, but it must be engaging. 

Some practical advice is to look at the short descriptions for movies on streaming platforms used to “hook” potential viewers as inspiration. This is arguably the most important element of your query letter, so make sure you do justice to your writing. 

Include a synopsis 

You’ve now hopefully “hooked” the agent, so it's time to pique their interest with a book synopsis. Think of this as an opportunity to reveal the important elements of:

      The plot

      The primary characters

      The conflicts and questions that drive your story 

You can find some inspiration by reading the blurbs of successful books in your genre to see how their authors introduce their writing effectively. 

Make comparisons to other titles 

Once you’ve written an engaging synopsis, you can make comparisons to similar titles and authors. This not only shows that you have an awareness of the market, but it could also make the agent think, “I like those books, maybe I’ll like this one, too.” Here are two ideas to start with:

      “For fans of”: this helps to show the potential of an existing audience.

      “X meets Y”: this shows how your book combines elements of other titles. 

Keep in mind that there are some comparisons worth avoiding in your letter:

      Outdated books. Market trends change so keep your comparisons current. Using Dickens as a comparison might be a little difficult!

      Chart-topping books. Your work may well become successful, but making comparisons to a franchise as huge as Harry Potter might not come across too well.

      Unknown books. If the comparisons are too niche, the agent might just get confused. 

Don’t forget to talk about yourself 

Following an overview of your book, you should write a short author bio to show all your writing-related accomplishments. This will give the agent a better idea of your publishing experience and potential. It's good practice to only stick to what’s relevant to your writing credentials — there's no need to discuss your dreams or your day job! 

Here are some examples that you might want to include:

      Have any of your books, short stories, poems, essays, etc. been published before?

      Have you won any awards or writing contests?

      Are you a graduate of a creative writing program?

      Have you attended any writing conferences or workshops? 

If you also have a substantial social media following, this is the ideal place to mention an existing audience that could help make your book successful. 

A simple one-line bio is fine 

Equally, many agents are open to debut authors and will mainly focus on the details about your story in your letter. So if you don’t have any particular writing experience yet, don’t worry! You could simply say something like: “I live in Timbuktu with my wife and two kids. This is my first novel.” 

Close with a “thank you” 

Don’t overcomplicate the ending of your query letter. You’re effectively writing a business email, so the best thing to do is to simply end with a formal salutation: 

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. 

Sincerely,

Your Name 

No need to try to organize a meeting or go into how excited you are at the idea of potentially working together. Just say your thanks and leave it there!

Double-check each agent’s requirements 

Once you’ve crafted a great letter, you’ll have to do some housekeeping to make sure it follows each agent’s submission guidelines. Otherwise, it could unfortunately be disregarded automatically. 

You should, of course, start with a self-proofread. But if you’d like more feedback, there are many editors and agents out there who offer query letter reviews. 

There are two main ways to send queries these days: online submission forms (e.g., QueryManager) and email. It’s common for authors to prepare their letter in a word processor like Microsoft Word and then copy and paste the text into the online form or the email body, depending on an agent’s requirements. Be sure to carefully check the submission requirements of each agent and tweak as needed — if an agent prefers receiving PDF files over Word documents, do as they say!

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If you’ve been struggling to put together a solid query letter that does justice to the quality of your work, then hopefully these tips have been helpful. Good luck and happy writing! 

Rose Atkinson-Carter is a writer with Reedsy, a marketplace that connects authors with the world’s best self-publishing resources and professionals like editors, designers, and ghostwriters. She lives in London. 

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