Upcoming Agent Spotlight Interviews & Guest Posts

  • Cate Hart Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 10/19/2026
  • Riley Jay Davis Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/11/2026
  • Hannah Teachout Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/23/2026
  • Michaela Whatnall Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 11/30/2026
  • Hollie Michaels Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 12/7/2026
  • J.D. Myall Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 12/16/2026

Agent Spotlight & Agent Spotlight Updates

  • Agent Spotlights & Interviews were all edited in 2021. Every year since then, I update some of them. I also regularly add information regarding changes in their agency as I find it. Agents spotlights and interviews been updated through most of the letter "R" as of 5/12/2026 and many have been reviewed by the agents. Look for more information as I find the time to update more agent spotlights.

Author Interview: Kate O’Shaughnessy and Brittle Magic Giveaway

 Happy Monday, Everyone! Today I’m excited to have Kate O’Shaughnessy here to share about her MG magical realism, Brittle Magic. Shiloh sounds like a kid I’d like to know, and I enjoy stories with magical realism. Plus, the blurb makes the book sound so good, so I’m excited to read it. 

Here’s a blurb from Goodreads:

 

Everyone in the Brittle family has a magical talent -- except Shiloh. But she's determined to unlock her own greatness in this charmingly quirky novel about family and forgiveness from Newbery Honor winner Kate O'Shaughnessy.

Nearly every member of the Brittle family has an extraordinary talent—except Shiloh.

Her aunt makes pickles that tell your fortune. Her great-aunt brews tea that gives you good dreams. Her sister can grow pumpkins the size of a small house. And her older brother—who died before Shiloh was born—had a gift no one will talk about. Her mom says Shiloh doesn’t need a talent to be special. But Shiloh knows she’s destined for greatness. And with the Brittle family reunion coming up, she’s determined to prove it to all her relatives.

When Auntie Dee’s fortune-telling pickles reveal that Shiloh does have a talent—and that it’s somehow connected to her late brother—Shiloh feels more confused than vindicated. Why would her mom have kept this from her?

The pickles’ prophesy offers cryptic clues for finding her talent—something involving an oven? and a new friend?—and Shiloh throws herself into the search. But discovering the truth about herself means digging up secrets her mom would rather keep buried.

This year’s family reunion may well be the most dramatic one yet…

Newbery Honor winner Kate O’Shaughnessy gives us a moving, magic-tinged story about family, friendship, forgiveness . . . and fortune-telling pickles!
 

Hi Kate! Thanks so much for joining us. 

Thanks for having me! I’m thrilled to be here. 

1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer. 

I came into writing as a reader. I grew up in a family that loved—and continues to love—to read. The family room in my childhood home had one soaring wall that was floor-to-ceiling bookshelves, completely filled up with books. My mom read to my brother and me every night, so the soundtrack of my childhood is her voice as I fell asleep. Even so, I struggled from a developmental perspective with reading, and was behind my peers for a chunk of time. I think that really burrowed into my psyche, because I used to think you had to be, like, preordained as gifted with words from birth in order to become an author. Which wasn’t me. But my love of reading remained, and often, even in college, I would ignore assigned class reading in favor of a novel. It wasn’t until my mid-twenties that I started writing creatively after work as a hobby, and that’s when I really fell in love. 

2. Where did you get the idea for Brittle Magic? 

I knew I wanted to do a cozy story set in autumn in New England—think apple orchards, creaky farmhouse, blazing foliage—with a hint of magic. That was the original seed of the idea for Brittle Magic, but it took quite a while for me to find its emotional heart. Once I had that, it was off to the races. 

3. What was your writing process like for Brittle Magic and your other middle grade books? How much time do you spend writing the first draft vs. revising it?


It followed a typical pattern to the rest of my published novels, which is: I have an idea that I mull over for a long period of time. Usually months to years. Then I have a Word document where I dump in all of my thoughts, bits of dialogue, ideas for scenes or characters, maybe even the beginning of a rough outline. For me, the key is that it’s not organized or chronological; I have to feel free to throw anything and everything I want into it, at any moment. The formatting is often all over the place, too, because I’ll paste from my Notes app or little lines I email to myself when I’m on a walk, etc. After I spend some time with this, I usually translate it into a slightly more organized document that is roughly chronological. Then I begin on the first draft! Typically, during a first draft, I try to write between 500 to 1,000 words a day. I don’t work on the weekends because I have young kids. But, and here’s the annoying kicker: at some point in the first draft, typically around 60-75%, I lose all faith in the vision and stop writing, thinking the flaws are fatal. Then I set it aside for a period of months to years. When I come back to it, I re-read it and see what the specific flaws are, realize they are not fatal, and finish the rest of the first draft in a burst of inspiration. If you remove the fallow period, where I set the manuscript aside, the first draft takes me about 3-4 months. Then I’ll do a revision over the course of a month or two, share it with beta readers, my agent, and then my editor. After that, rounds usually take about two months or so. 

4. You have a very interesting writing process. I’m glad it works for you. How did you decide on the magical realism aspects of your story? What tips do you have for other writers who want to write a story with magical realism? 

I knew I wanted magic to be a side dish in this novel, not the main course. The way I decided to do this was to thread it through the Brittle family tree, and keep all the magical “talents” grounded and rooted in nature. I wanted it to be somewhat believable that most of these gifts could slip through the world, unnoticed. I would say that my biggest piece of advice for writers who want their stories to bend more toward magical realism or fabulism would be to really think about what your story is about, at its most basic level. Is it about love, grief, friendship? Try to find a way to apply your magic to that central building block. Brittle Magic is about family. It only made sense to me, then, that the magic would be family-based, too.

5. That’s great advice. One of the reasons I’m excited to read your book is that Shiloh sounds like a very sympathetic character whom I’d like to know more about. Share about how she developed as a character as you wrote her story. 

Thank you! I wanted Shiloh to feel real. I wanted her to have very real flaws. She’s fearless and so determined, but she’s also messy and clumsy and jealous and selfish sometimes, too. It feels kind of woo-woo to say, but I try to let the characters develop themselves. Sometimes, in that big messy document I wrote about earlier, I’ll list a bunch of traits or quirks or likes and dislikes I think the character should have. Often, once I’m done with the first draft, many of those line items have been struck off or cast away. So much of the magic for me in writing is discovering things about the characters and the story that I didn’t know before. Letting them unfurl themselves as the drafts progress. That’s how it happened with Shiloh. She has this big goal of finding out what her magical talent is, so her single-minded determination was always there. But much of Shiloh’s character came out during the drafting process. 

6. The blurb for Brittle Magic and your other books are really good and make me want to read them. How do you draft such compelling blurbs? How can we learn to write good ones like you? 

Wow, thank you so much! This is music to my ears, because I find the process of writing the blurb or the jacket copy or the “pitch” to be a pain level 8 on a scale of 1-10. It’s so incredibly hard to distill a book down to so few words. The best advice I have is lots and lots and lots of drafts. I always aim to include the inciting incident, the main character’s goal, the stakes, and the biggest obstacle that the character will face on their journey. My agent, Pete, helps with this part a lot, and so does my editor, Nancy. Nancy is the queen of these blurbs. I can’t remember exactly, but I know at least a few of them have come straight out of her wise brain with minimal input from me. But I think sharp eyes and many drafts is the best recipe for success. And it doesn’t hurt to have an incredible editor with many years of experience. (Thanks, Nancy!) 

7. Your agent is Peter Knapp, whom I admire as an agent. How did he become your agent, and what was your road to getting a publishing contract for The Lonely Heart of Maybelle Lane, your debut book that was published in 2020? 

Pete is an incredible agent (and person), and I feel so lucky to have been able to work with him over the last eight years. I saw him speak at a conference, and based on his presentation I knew I wanted to make sure he was on my list. I queried him a year or two later with Maybelle, and the rest is history! I think we spent about six months or so working on the manuscript together—Pete is very editorial—before taking it out on submission. Nancy Siscoe at Knopf bought it, and I’ve been lucky enough to work with her on all of my middle grade since then. 

8. It’s awesome you work with the same editor. Since your debut book was published, you’ve had three other middle grade and one young adult book published. From your bio, which is very impressive: “Her books have won numerous distinctions and awards, including a Newbery Honor, the Northern California Book Award, and the Vermont State Book Award. Her work has been nominated for over thirty state award reading lists and recognized on best-of lists by places and publications such as the New York Public Library, Bank Street College of Education, Booklist, and Kirkus Reviews.” 

8. Tell us how your career has grown since you were a debut author. What tips do you have for other writers about growing their careers? 

Wow, thank you so much. All of your questions are so framed with such kindness. I wish I could say I had a strategic vision for my career, but I haven’t. Most of it has been following the ideas that I’m most interested in and going from there. But it’s worth saying that I’ve had LOTS of book ideas and pitches (and occasionally full manuscripts!) that have been rejected or haven’t worked out along the way. I also think so much of how things pan out in this industry is due to luck, having the right in-house support for a title. 

9. How are you planning to celebrate the release of Brittle Magic and promote it? How are you juggling the release of your debut YA, A Season for Falling, on September 22, 2026, with the release of Brittle Magic on October 20, 2026? 

For Brittle Magic, I’m having a book launch on Sunday, October 25th at 4pm at Linden Tree Books in Los Altos, CA! For any local readers or writers I would love, love, love to see you there. It’s honestly been a lot to juggle. I didn’t have a launch for A Season for Falling because it was just too much to handle all so close together. Two books out in two months has definitely been a bit of a wild ride. 

10. I’d love to go, but I live in Michigan. I noticed on your website that you offer a free 10-15-minute Q&A for teachers who can’t afford a more formal visit. It sounds like a cool idea. Why did you decide to offer them? Do many teachers take advantage of them, and do they help you connect with middle graders? 

I always want to make sure that teachers and/or librarians who might not have the budget or wherewithal to bring me to their school for a more official visit have an opportunity to bring me in to chat with their students. A Q&A also requires zero prep on my end. I can be writing at my desk, take a break and chat with students for 15 minutes, and then get right back to writing. What’s funny is that fewer people take advantage of it than you’d think! When I’ve spoken to other writers who offer the same sort of visit, they’ve agreed on this. That it’s their least popular visit option. I’m not sure why. At most I do it once a month, but typically it’s more like once every other month. Teachers and librarians, if you’re reading this, we mean it! We’re always happy to drop in to chat with your students! 

11. What are you working on now? 

My next YA romance! And I’m also very, very slowly working on a new MG that I’ve passed back and forth with my agent. 

Thanks for sharing all your advice, Kate. You can find Kate at: 

www.kloshaughnessy.com

www.instagram.com/kloshaughnessy 

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Want to win Brittle Magic? Thanks to Kate for supplying a book for this book giveaway contest.

How to Enter:

  • Leave a Comment: Drop a comment below by October 31st with your email address. To protect your privacy from spam bots, please write your email address using the "name [at] gmail [dot] com" format.
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🌍 Eligibility: The book giveaway is U.S. only.

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

  • Wednesday, October 21st: Agent spotlight interview with Cate Hart and a query critique giveaway
  • Monday, October 25th: Interview with Jackie Garcia Morales and a giveaway of her MG Pesky Rules
  • Monday, October 25th: Interview with Jackie Garcia Morales and a giveaway of her MG Pesky Rules
  • Monday, November 1st: Participating in the Thanks a Latte Giveaway Hop
  • Wednesday, November 3rd: Interview with Angela Cheng and a giveaway of her YA The Fast Track
  • Monday, November 9th: Interview with Karen Foxlee and a giveaway of The Wonderous Tale of Lavender Wolfe
  • Wednesday, November 11th: Agent spotlight interview with Riley Jay Davis and a query critique giveaway 

I hope to see you on Wednesday!

 

 

Silly Pumpkins Giveaway Hop

 


 

Happy Friday, Everyone! Welcome to the Silly Pumkin Giveaway Hop at Literary Rambles. I am thrilled to celebrate Halloween with this fantastic book or Amazon Gift Card giveaway event hosted by MamatheFox and MomDoesReviews. If you are a writer working hard to get traditionally published or a book lover looking for your next favorite read, you are in the perfect place. Alongside today’s fun giveaway, I have a packed month ahead full of exclusive literary agent interviews with query critique giveaways, author interviews with book giveaways, and industry insights to help you on your publishing journey. 

I hope you’re all enjoying a beautiful fall before the holiday season starts. I hope those of you who love celebrating Halloween have fantastic, spooky fun. 

Book of Your Choice or Amazon Gift Card Giveaway 

Your Prize Options:

  • Book of Your Choice: Any book of your choice valued at $20 or less—this includes all genres and age ranges, including Adult fiction and non-fiction!
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Want to win your next favorite read or a gift card? Enter today for a chance to win a book of your choice ($20 or less) or a $10 Amazon Gift Card!

How to Enter:

  • Leave a Comment: Drop a comment below by October 30th telling me whether you want a book (and which one) or the Amazon gift card. To protect your privacy from spam bots, please write your email address using the "name [at] gmail [dot] com" format.
  • Bluesky Bonus: If you follow me on Bluesky, mention your handle in your comment for an extra entry!
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🌍 Eligibility: The book giveaway is U.S. only, and the Amazon gift card giveaway is International. You must be 13 years or older to enter. 

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops 

  • Monday, October 19th: Interview with Kate O’Shaughnessy and a giveaway of her MG Brittle Magic
  • Wednesday, October 21st: Agent spotlight interview with Cate Hart and a query critique giveaway
  • Monday, October 25th: Interview with Jackie Garcia Morales and a giveaway of her MG Pesky Rules 

I hope to see you on Monday! And here are the other blogs participating in this blog hop:

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Literary Agent Interview: Jenny Lewis and Query Critique Giveaway

Today I’m thrilled to have agent Jenny Lewis here. She is an associate agent at Darhansoff & Verrill Literary Agents. 

Hi­ Jenny! Thanks so much for joining us. 

About Jenny: 

1. Tell us how you became an agent, how long you’ve been one, and what you’ve been doing as an agent.

 

Like almost everyone who ends up in publishing, I was always a bookworm and loved reading. Publishing was always in the back of my mind, but it felt more like a concept than a career—like a job you could only do if you were Kate Hudson in a 2005 rom-com. I settled on journalism as a back-up, but after my mom got sick, I changed courses. I moved back home to care for her, and found myself back in my childhood bedroom, looking to the books I loved growing up for the comfort and escape they once brought me. Publishing began to feel more tangible after that—it’s cheesy and idealistic, but I wanted to be a part of the process that brought these books to people who needed them as much as I did.

 

I landed an internship with Writers House, and before the end of my first day, I was hooked—it was entirely different than I had expected, but I loved that the job married editorial creativity with author advocacy. I got my first job at Sobel Weber Associates, where I worked for three years assisting and agenting. I briefly pivoted to the publishing house side, and while it was enlightening to see how things work on the other side of the table, I really missed working directly with authors. I made the move to Darhansoff and Verrill in June, and I’m thrilled to be building my list here. Publishing isn’t always as glamorous as rom-com heroines made it look, but I feel incredibly lucky to have landed in a role I love! 

About the Agency: 

2. Share a bit about your agency and what it offers to its authors. 

Darhansoff and Verrill is a full-service boutique literary agency that has been in business since 1975, representing high-quality fiction, nonfiction, and children’s books. We are agents and advocates, readers and editors, negotiators and mediators. The market may fluctuate and the industry may shift, but we remain steadfast champions of creative work. 

What She’s Looking For: 

3. What age groups do you represent—picture books, MG, and/or YA? What genres do you represent, and what are you looking for in submissions for these genres? 

I’m primarily looking for middle grade, YA, and adult fiction! Voice is always what hooks me first, above all else—I love when an author can balance humor and heart without turning too saccharine or too sarcastic. My taste varies across genres, but you can always check out my current wishlist here! I update it semi-obsessively and it’s perhaps overly comprehensive, so you can always check back to see my current taste. 

4.  Is there anything you would be especially excited to seeing in the genres you are interested in? 

Growing up, I was obsessed with what I’ve come to call “orphan lit”—give me a middle-grade protagonist that would fit right in to a Dickensian novel and I’m hooked. I know it’s not as popular now as it was when I was growing up, but I do think there’s something timeless to the magic and whimsy in those stories. I’d love to see the next MOLLY MOON or SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS that speaks to the issues kids are facing today. 

In YA, I’d love to see more campus novels, especially if they feature a daring or outspoken female protagonist (think THE DISREPUTABLE HISTORY OF FRANKIE LANDAU-BANKS). Boarding school and college novels almost always hook me, so long as they are based in the real world. I love a touch of snark in YA, so bring on your moody, angsty protagonists! 

In adult, I’m a sucker for “weird-girl lit”, and I’m always looking for messy protagonists that challenge me. Anything that sits at the intersection of horrifying and heartening is sure to hook me. 

What She Isn’t Looking For: 

5. What types of submissions are you not interested in? 

I’m not necessarily one for strict genre works. I love a high-concept hook and genre blending, but I prefer works that are firmly grounded in the real world. Touches of magic or sci-fi are always welcome, but I’m probably not the right agent for fully-crafted fantasy worlds. Right now, I’m also not looking for picture books. 

Agent Philosophy: 

6. What is your philosophy as an agent both in terms of the authors you want to work with and the books you want to represent? 

The author-agent relationship is far more collaborative than many people usually realize from outside the industry, so above all else, I’m looking for authors who I can build a partnership with long-term. In that partnership, mutual and open-ended communication is extraordinarily important to me. Authors need to be receptive to critiques and editorial advice based on a quickly-shifting market, but I also think it’s important that an author feels empowered to speak up if those changes detract from their editorial vision of their work. I take the position that my editorial notes are a jumping-off point for us to collaborate on crafting the best version of your manuscript that we can. 

Editorial Agent: 

7. Are you an editorial agent? If so, what is your process like when you’re working with your authors before submitting to editors? 

Yes! I love the editorial process, and it’s so rewarding to see authors have their editorial visions come to life. It’s not uncommon for me to go through a few rounds of edits with a client, first working through big-picture developmental or structural edits, and then moving on to line-edits before we go on sub. I aim to make the process as collaborative as possible. 

Query Methods and Submission Guidelines: (Always verify before submitting) 

8. How should authors query you and what do you want to see with the query letter? 

All submissions should be sent to submissions@dvagency.com! I’m the person at the agency who reads the lion’s share of the queries, and it’s one of the most fun parts of the job. The one thing I frequently see missing from queries is a clear articulation of the stakes. Authors can tend to leave that vague to avoid spoilers, but as an agent, I want spoilers. I want to see that you’ve thought through and can express your characters’ motivations, obstacles, and the stakes they face—it tells me a lot about your craft and your ability to implement the kind of edits we might need to make. Grounding your query in classical story structure (character à want à obstacle à action against the obstacle) is a really great approach—it’s classic for a reason! 

I also love a personable query—I know a lot of authors get caught up in the etiquette and formality of querying, but if you’re honest and personable, I’m endeared to you and your writing from the start. 

9.  Do you have any specific dislikes in query letters or the first pages submitted to you? 

Purple prose! I notice a lot of authors over-writing their opening pages in the hope that it’ll hook or impress an agent, but it tends to turn me off fairly quickly; you don’t need to use an adverb to tell me something you could show me through your character’s actions. The best writing is honest and straightforward—that’s not to say it shouldn’t be artful or delicately crafted, but flowery prose is often distracting. Your opening pages should welcome us into the world and voice of your characters, and purple prose is an obstacle for agents and readers. 

Response Time: 

10. What’s your response time to queries and requests for more pages of a manuscript? 

I always aim to respond to queries within 4-6 weeks. Once I request a full, I do my best to get back to them within 30 days. I try to keep it as short as possible, but I know how nerve-wracking it can be for authors—if I anticipate it’s going to take longer, I do my best to let the author know. Communication is one of the most important parts of the author-agent relationship, and I try to hold up my end of the bargain! 

Self-Published and Small Press Authors: 

11.  Are you open to representing authors who have self-published or been published by smaller presses? What advice do you have for them if they want to try to find an agent to represent them? 

Yes! Self-publishing is not necessarily a plus or minus for me--I approach all queries based on the quality of writing first. My biggest piece of advice for self-published authors looking for representation is to be open to collaboration, feedback, and delays. I’ve said it above, but traditional publishing is a far more collaborative (and far slower paced) than self-published authors often anticipate. As long as you come in with an open mind, we will too. 

Clients: 

12. Who are some of the authors you represent? 

Having just moved to Darhansoff and Verrill this summer, I’m still actively building my list. I don’t want to reveal anyone’s agented news before they’ve had the chance to do it themselves, but I’m looking forward to some reveals soon! 

Interviews and Guest Posts: 

13. Please share the links to any interviews, guest posts, and podcasts you think would be helpful to writers interested in querying you. 

My Publisher’s Marketplace page and Manuscript Wishlist are the best place to find this info—check them out to get a better idea of what I’m interested in before you query! 

Links and Contact Info: 

14. Please share how writers should contact you to submit a query and your links on the Web. 

Queries should be sent directly to submissions@dvagency.com. Please indicate in the subject line if you’re querying me or one of my colleagues! I’m trying to stay off socials these days, but you can (sporadically) find me on Twitter and Bluesky.  

Additional Advice: 

15. Is there any other advice you’d like to share with aspiring authors that we haven’t covered? 

A lot of other agents have offered this advice, but I think it’s worth repeating that “no” is a word both agents and authors are used to hearing a lot. Querying can be such a vulnerable and intimidating process, and it can haunt even the most talented writers. Above all else, I’d encourage authors to a) remember that querying at all is a (genuinely!) brave and hopeful act, and I applaud anyone who is brave and hopeful enough to endeavor on the path to publication, and b) to remember that rejection is almost never personal—I know it gets grating to hear (or not hear) rejections, but a “no” should never be a deterrent to moving forward. Keep writing, keep taking feedback, and keep going! 

Thanks for sharing all your advice, Jenny! 

Have any experience with this agent? See something that needs updating? Please leave a comment or email me at natalieiaguirre7@gmail.com 

Note: These agent profiles and interviews presently focus on agents who accept children's fiction. Please take the time to verify anything you might use here before querying an agent. The information found here is subject to change. 

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Want to get your book pitch polished by a professional? Enter today for a chance to win a free query critique from literary agent Jenny! 

How to Enter:

  • Leave a Comment: Drop a comment below by October 24th to lock in your entry. To protect your privacy from spam bots, please write your email address using the "name [at] gmail [dot] com" format.
  • Bluesky Bonus: If you follow me on Bluesky, mention your handle in your comment for an extra entry!
  • Sharing Bonus: If you share about this contest on your own social media sites or blog, let me know in the comments for extra entries.
  • Blog Follower Bonus: If you follow Literary Rambles via Blogger or email subscription, let me know in the comments for an extra entry.

🌍 This giveaway is open internationally! You must be 13 years or older to enter. 

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops


  • Monday, October 25th: Interview with Jackie Garcia Morales and a giveaway of her MG Pesky Rules
  • Monday, November 1st: Participating in the Thanks a Latte Giveaway Hop
  • Wednesday, November 3rd: Interview with Angela Cheng and a giveaway of her YA The Fast Track
  • Monday, November 9th: Interview with Karen Foxlee and a giveaway of The Wonderous Tale of Lavender Wolfe
  • Wednesday, November 11th: Agent spotlight interview with Riley Jay Davis and a query critique giveaway 

I hope to see you on Monday!

Author Guest Post on Crafting and Breaking the Rules: Shifa Saltagi Safadi and Sisters Alone Giveaway

Happy Monday, Everyone! Today, I am absolutely thrilled to welcome National Book Award-winning middle grade author Shifa Saltagi Safadi to the blog to share her experience crafting a middle grade story and breaking the rules. She will also discuss how she used this in writing her wonderful new adventure story, Sisters Alone. 

Shifta’s publisher is also generously offering a free book giveaway to one lucky winner! Read on to see Shifa’s wonderful tips, and leave a comment below to enter the giveaway. 

Here’s a blurb of Sisters Alone from Goodreads:

 

From the National Book Award–winning author of Kareem Between comes a powerful novel in verse about two sisters trapped in a blizzard in a heart-wrenching story of sisterhood and survival.

Two sisters. One storm. A fight for their lives.

Rama is all fire—fierce, quick to anger, and trying to hold her family together while battling the monster of intrusive thoughts. Leena is all ice—quiet, numbed to the vibrancy of the world, as she silently blames herself for their mother’s death.

When their father must travel for work, a sudden blizzard traps the sisters alone at their rural home. As the storm tears through their house, they’re left without power, without food, without shelter—and with no one to rely on but each other.

Told in powerful, poetic verse, Sisters Alone is a heart-stopping story of sisterhood, survival, and the quiet strength it takes to keep going, even when the world feels like it's falling apart.
 

Now here’s Shifa! 

Learn How to Craft, then BREAK all the Rules

When I first started writing with the intention of getting published, I sat in front of my computer, opened a word document…and began. 

I had graduated with an English literature degree, analyzed so many poems and novels that I could immediately understand Shakespearean plays, had a solid basic understanding of grammar and vocabulary. I was ready to be a novelist, just like all those writers I saw on television who wrote from their heart and got their super awesome book deals. I had an idea, a character, and a shiny story spark in my mind. That was all I needed, right? 

Wrong. 

I wrote about 20,000 words of a young adult novel before I got to the middle, and stopped. I had no clue what to write anymore, no clue how to progress in the story, no clue how to make more words on the page until I got to my ideal word count and finished the book. I stared at the screen, convinced I had writer’s block. And if I pushed through enough, the words would come and eventually I would be able to make it to the end. 

What was really happening to me was that I had lost my motivation for this project. Once that initial spark got out of me and onto the page, I was unable to continue. And this happened to me about two more times with two different middle grade ideas before I realized that there must be more to this writing thing than just sitting in front of a computer and typing whatever flows through my mind. 

And so I decided to change gears. 

I googled “how to write a book”, and a whole world opened up for me. I discovered craft books, plotting methods, writing courses, beat sheets— so many resources to learn from. I was ECSTATIC! I love learning, I love formulas and to-do lists, and I immediately threw myself into as many writing courses as I could afford. I plotted the beats of a new idea into the traditional three-act structure model, fleshed out a whole character arc from beginning to end, and actually finished a draft successfully. 

And, the process WORKED! 

I got a literary agent, got multiple book deals with my dream editor and publisher, and my debut middle grade novel in verse KAREEM BETWEEN won the National Book Award for Young People’s Literature in 2024. I had made it! I cracked the code on writing books using craft rules, and so it was going to be so easy for me to write another book…or so I thought. 

For my second novel in verse, SISTERS ALONE, I plotted out a story and a character based on the idea of a girl left home alone in a blizzard— and ended up feeling like the story was missing something. So I added another character, her sister. 

But that ended up messing with my plot. So I replotted. 

But then I ended up feeling like the voices and emotional arcs of the two sisters were two similar, and so then I went ahead and redid those too. 

But then the characters were so different, the original plot wasn’t convincing anymore. And nothing can be more horrifying for an author writing a survival story and then feeling like the survival part is off! The very axis on which my story revolved felt wrong, and I couldn’t figure out how to fix it. 

It took many long revision hours, and many long edit letters from my editor to finally get to a final manuscript of SISTERS ALONE that I felt proud of. I questioned myself constantly on if I could do this again, if I had only one good story in me after all, if I was meant to be a writer of multiple middle grade books, and yet, I learned so much along this difficult way! 

I learned that my rigidness in trying to follow the three-act structure was hindering my writing. My obsession with specific beats was making the story feel too plotted and machinated. My editor suggested a five-act structure instead of my original three to allow for more flexibility in the events, and the plot finally landed into place. 

I also learned to stop stressing so much about following the “synopsis”. My characters had a mind of their own when I started writing their story, and the outline of the scenes was not always implemented how I originally plotted when I began typing. I learned to be okay with veering from the original plan. I learned to follow the characters to where they wanted to go, and let them appear authentically on the page. I learned that a plot is only meant to be a guide for me to finish the draft, and is not meant to be the LAW that I base my whole story around. 

Most importantly, I learned that I can BREAK the rules of grammar and literature. 

In SISTERS ALONE, this breaking of rules became a tool in my storytelling. Leena is the younger sister, a swimmer, feeling small compared to her older sister, her “failings” causing her to dwell on the past, unable to look forward with her mother gone, obsessed with creating a beautiful scrapbook of vivid pictures to try and keep her mother’s memory alive. Her poems show up in non-capitalized sentences, lyrical sensory based poetry, and short lines that trickle into each other without much proper punctuation, like the flow of water on a page.

Rama, the older sister, is the opposite. She struggles with anxiety and loud intrusive thoughts since their mother’s death, and her anger bubbles inside of her like a volcano at all the changes in her life that she wants to control, and the past that she just wants to forget. Her poetry shows up in longer lines, repetitive sentences, and LARGE CAPITAL words that signify her boiling panic and loud negative thoughts. 

The sisters’ story breaks the rules of grammar and English literature in intentional ways, to highlight character voice. This deep dive into characterization rewarding, and it challenged me to really dive deep into what would have a distinct character stand out on a page. 

This process of breaking the rules of grammar also empowered me to realize the importance of trusting my own instincts in the writing process. As a person who struggles a lot with imposter syndrome, it is absolutely terrifying to think of people possibly not liking the words I struggle to write. I spend way more time than I should worrying about whether my books are going to do well when they are published or not. 

But I realized much later, after sending my SISTERS ALONE manuscript off to my editor for the final time, that having confidence in crafting my stories IS THE KEY to me being a better author. Because nothing kills good writing like fear. And freeing myself from the rules of “a three act structure” and/or the fear of perception allowed me to take risks that actually made my stories stronger.

Made my story better. 

In the age of AI dominating discourse about writing, where young people and new writers might be wondering if it is just easier to use artificial intelligence to write FOR them, plugging their ideas into some machine that might have “perfect” grammar and sentence structure, I think nothing could be more important than showing readers English rules being broken in published books. Because in this intentional choice of creativity is a reminder to readers that what matters most in writing isn’t perfection. 

It is writing from your heart.

 Thanks for sharing all your advice, Shifa! You can find Shifa at https://shifasafadi.com/

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