Upcoming Agent Spotlight Interviews & Guest Posts

  • Shelly Romero Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 8/20/2025

Agent Spotlight & Agent Spotlight Updates

  • Agent Spotlights & Interviews were all edited in 2021. Every year since then, I update some of them. I also regularly add information regarding changes in their agency as I find it. I have been updated through the letter "N" as of 1/26/2024 and many have been reviewed by the agents. Look for more information as I find the time to update more agent spotlights.

Debut Author Interview: Ryan James Black and The Dark Times of Nimble Nottingham Giveaway

 Happy Monday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have debut author Ryan James Black here to share about his MG The Dark Times of Nimble Nottingham. I love stories that mash fantasy and historical fiction, and I’m excited to read it. 

Here’s a blurb from Ryan’s website: 

Set during World War II, a twelve-year-old orphan who accidentally unleashes a shadow monster onto the streets of London must team up with unlikely allies to hunt it down.

Surviving on the streets of World War II London alone certainly hasn’t been easy, but Nimble Nottingham has perfected the art of going it alone—and that’s just how he likes it. The only friend he needs is his beloved dog, Winnie. To pass the time between rolling blackouts and bombs falling through the air, Nim spends his days fence-climbing, roof-jumping, and gargoyle-perching…that is when he’s not scrounging for food to stave off the ever-present hunger the war has brought to London.

 

So when opportunity strikes in the form of a bomb falling onto the notoriously creepy Gravenhurst Manor, Nim knows he has to get inside and find whatever spoils he can get his hands on to sell for food. Get in. Get out. Quick as a flash. At least, that was the plan until Mouse—a member of a local street gang called the Dead End Kids—shows up and invites himself along for the heist. 

Inside, Mouse and Nim encounter far more than just crumbling walls and shattered windows. Beneath Gravenhurst Manor lies a secret room and inside that room is a locked safe. Nim, inspired by the Hardy Boys adventures he used to read at Waifs and Strays orphanage, knows that something this protected has to be valuable, and so he cracks the safe and unknowingly unleashes a monster. 

A shadow creature is now loose on the streets of London, and it’s up to Nim, Mouse, and a band of unattended children to end its reign of terror. 

Followers News 

Before I get to Ryan’s interview, I have Follower News to share.

 

Samantha Bryant released Change for the Better, the series ender for her Menopausal Superhero series, a five-book series featuring women "of a certain age" with superpowers! Here’s a blurb:

Something is off about Jessica “Flygirl” Roark. With Dr. Cindy Liu safely in custody, unable to hurt anyone with her experiments, a new husband at home, and a team of friends working to save the citizens of Springfield, it should be smooth sailing through a cloudless sky. But Jessica is being secretive, avoiding spending time with her family and teammates. Rumors of a mole, relationship drama, and injuries leave our heroes unsure of who among them can really be trusted. Is this the end of everything they’ve built? Or can they forge a new way forward? Here are a few links: Amazon series link: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B074CHNLQ2 Website: https://samanthabryant.com

 


Jemima Petit released The Quest For Orichalcum. Here’s a blurb: The Quest for Orichalcum tells how it all started – the revolution that transformed the galactic economy, let alone space travel. How did a postgraduate student–a refugee from an obscure planet–change galactic communications? Why did a talented software engineer take up asteroid mining? Which girls influenced their choices in life? And how did they hit it rich in asteroid mining anyway.
 Here’s some links:
~~Amazon~~ ~~Apple iTunes~~ ~~B&N~~ ~~Kobo~~ ~~Smashwords~~





Rebecca Douglas has a new release, Edited Out, coming on 8/25/2025. Here's a blurb: Working part-time at the local inn is fun, until everything goes sideways. When a uniformly disliked writer-in-residence turns up dead, the local police ask Seffi to use her botanical knowledge to figure out what killed her. And could she hurry up, before the inn’s business tanks, and takes the bakery down with it? And here are a few links:

Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0FLB4MDN2

 

Interview With Ryan Black 

Hi Ryan! Thanks so much for joining us. 

1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer. 

Hi! I’m Ryan, writer and book lover, born and raised in rural Manitoba, Canada. I grew up loving stories in all forms – books, comics, movies – and after discovering Dungeons & Dragons around eleven years old, I began writing stories of my own. Fantasy and horror, mostly. The writing ebbed and flowed as I got older, but I always returned to it. 

2. It’s great how Dungeons and Dragons inspired you to write as a kid. Where did you get the idea for The Dark Times of Nimble Nottingham? 

I got the idea for The Dark Time of Nimble Nottingham after hearing a scary story about a killer who prowled the dark streets of London during the Blitz. The story stuck with me and got my wheels spinning. The idea of a ‘horror within a horror’ was something I found very compelling, and planted the seed for my book. 

Your Writing Process 

3. Many books are set in WWII. What made you decide to set your story in this time period, and what research into the war and life in London during it did you have to do?

I set my story during the Blitz because I find this time period fascinating, and I think it’s an amazing example of the power of the human spirit. So many people lost so much, yet night after blacked-out night, they refused to give up. They persevered. Also, the idea of a city that is literally lightless at night has a fantastical element I enjoyed writing about. I researched quite a bit about how children fared during the Blitz, the geography of London – including some of the city’s spookiest spots – and ancient London history. 

4. What was your writing process like? How long did writing and editing your manuscript take before you decided you were ready to query? 

I wrote this book fairly quickly after an initial lightning strike of inspiration. Re-writes however, were a different story. I applied for and was fortunate to be chosen for Author Mentor Match (an online writing program in which writers are teamed with mentors to help polish their manuscript) and had the benefit of having the wonderful Cristin Williams (her debut novel, The Whisper of Stars is coming November 6, 2025!) help me work through re-writes and edits. I took this book apart and put it back together again several times before I was finally happy with it. All in, I’d estimate it was two years or so from the initial draft before I sent out the first query letter. 

5. Congrats on winning the mentorship contest. After being alone much of his life, Nimble must learn to work with Mouse and his gang. Share a bit about Nimble’s emotional ARC since he was a loner and didn’t have any friends before meeting Mouse. 

Nim’s had a hard life. He never knew his parents. He grew up at Waifs & Strays orphanage where he never felt he fit in. When he runs away to be on his own, he tells himself he doesn’t need anyone. He armors himself against the world, convinces himself he’s better off alone. After he meets Mouse and Abby and spends some time with them, he begins to understand the power of connection, friendship, love. They give him something he’s never had before; kindness. Ultimately, Nim realizes that people need people, even loners. 

Your Journey to Publication 

6. How did Peter Knapp become your agent? What was the querying process like for you? 

I queried Pete in the typical way (query letter and sample chapters) and he offered me the opportunity for an R&R (revise and resubmit) which I happily accepted. Pete and his amazing team gave me some really insightful feedback on my book, and after another round of edits I re-submitted and Pete offered to represent me. 

7. What was going on submission for the first time like? Did anything about the process surprise you? 

Submission is stressful! Once I had a literary agent I felt like a marathon runner a just few strides from the finish line. But those last few strides are tough! I found rejections really stung because I felt like I was so close to realizing my dream. The only thing about the process that really surprised me is how many times in a day I can check my inbox! 

Promoting Your Book 

8. How are you planning to celebrate your book’s release and promote it afterward? 

I’ve been dreaming of finding my novel on bookstore shelves for well over a decade, so first thing I’m going to do is a local bookstore tour on debut day with my family just to prove its real, look at it, pick it up, and maybe even sign a few copies. In September I have an official book launch at a local bookstore where I’m looking forward to celebrating with family and friends. After that, well, I hope to visit schools and libraries and share my book with kids and book lovers. 

9. Have you learned anything about marketing your book from watching other debut authors in the Middle Grade Escapes group who have already had their books released? 

I’ve learned to not be too hard on myself when it comes to social media and specifically self-promotion. Also, to take the time to really enjoy the debut process. This is the realization of years of dreaming and hard work. 

10. That’s great advice. What are you working on now? 

I have a second book coming from Penguin/Nancy Paulsen in 2026. It’s a supernatural whodunnit about the World’s most haunted town and supernatural tourism destination, three weeks after all the ghosts inexplicably go missing. At the same time, I’m working on another middle grade historical horror adventure that I’m really excited about! 

Thanks for sharing all your advice, Ryan. You can find Ryan at ryanjamesblack.com and @ryanjamesblack on all socials! 

Giveaway Details

Ryan is generously offering a hardback of fThe Dark Times of Nimble Nottingham for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by August 30th. If I do not have your email (I can no longer get it from your Google Profile), you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address. 

If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or other social media sites and/or follow me on Twitter or Bluesky or follow Ryan on his social media sites, mention this in the comments, and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. This book giveaway is U.S. and Canada. 

Marvelous Middle Grade Monday is hosted by Greg Pattridge. You can find the participating blogs on his blog. 

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops 

Wednesday, August 20th I have an agent spotlight interview with Shelly Romero and a query critique giveaway 

Monday, August 25th I have an interview with author James Ponti and a giveaway of his MG Hurricane Heist 

Monday, September 1st I’m participating in the Glam and Glitz Giveaway Hop 

Wednesday, September 3rd I have an interview with debut author Skyla Arndt and a giveaway of her YA House of Hearts and my IWSG post 

Monday, September 8th I have an interview with author J.A. Dauber and a giveaway of his MG Press 1 for Invasion 

Wednesday, September 10th I have an agent spotlight interview with Ashlee MacCallum and a query critique giveaway 

I hope to see you on Monday!

 

Old School Giveaway Hop

 


Happy Saturday Everyone! Today I'm excited to participate in the Old School Giveaway Hop hosted by MamatheFox  and MomDoesReviews. I hope your last weeks of summer are fun. It's hard to believe how fast the summer is going. 

Book of Your Choice or Amazon Gift Card 

I am offering a book of your choice that is $20 or less on Amazon. I’m looking forward to seeing what books everyone is looking forward to reading.  

If you don’t have a book you want, you can win a $10 Amazon Gift Card. 

Giveaway Details

To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by August 30th telling me whether you want a book, and if so, which one, or the Amazon gift card and your email address. Be sure to include your email address. If I do not have your email (I can no longer get it from your Google Profile), you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address. 

If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or other social media sites and/or follow me on Twitter or Bluesky, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. The book giveaway is U.S. only and the Amazon gift card giveaway is International.

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

Monday, August 18th, I have an interview with debut author Ryan James Black and a giveaway of his MG The Dark Times of Nimble Nottingham 

Wednesday, August 20th, I have an agent spotlight interview with Shelly Romero and a query critique giveaway 

Monday, August 25th, I have an interview with author James Ponti and a giveaway of his MG Hurricane Heist

Monday, September 1st I’m participating in the Glam and Glitz Giveaway Hop 

Wednesday, September 3rd I have an interview with debut author Skyla Arndt and a giveaway of her YA House of Hearts and my IWSG post 

Monday, September 8th I have an interview with author J.A. Dauber and a giveaway of his MG Press 1 for Invasion 

Wednesday, September 10th I have an agent spotlight interview with Ashlee MacCallum and a query critique giveaway 

I hope to see you on Monday!

And here are all the other blogs participating in this blog hop: MamatheFox, Mom Does Reviews, and all participating blogs are not held responsible for sponsors who fail to fulfill their prize obligations.

Literary Agent Interview: Krista Van Dolzer and Query + 1st Three Pages Critique Giveaway

 Today I’m thrilled to have agent Krista Van Dolzer here. She’s an agent at The Unter Agency. 

Hi­ Krista! Thanks so much for joining us. 

About Krista: 

1. Tell us how you became an agent, how long you’ve been one, and what you’ve been doing as an agent.

 

As a multi-published children’s author and Twitter pitch event organizer, I’d been wanting to try on other hats in the publishing industry for years. I’d always thought my skill set would be ideally suited to agenting, but having been left in the lurch when an agent unexpectedly retired, I didn’t want to put other writers through a similar experience unless I was 100% committed. I gave agenting a try with a year-long internship with Marie Lamba at The Jennifer De Chaira Literary Agency, then decided to apply for several entry-level positions on the editorial side. When none of those panned out, I considered getting a job in some other industry, but that thought made me so sad that I realized I was 100% committed to bringing awesome books to readers. This led me to reach out to a handful of agents I admired, and Jennifer Unter was good enough to take me on. 

I’ve been working with her and Jen Nadol since March of this year, helping out with social media and establishing relationships with the agency’s foreign subagents, as I’m passionate about selling our clients’ foreign rights. I started accepting queries myself in mid-April. 

About the Agency: 

2. Share a bit about your agency and what it offers to its authors. 

The Unter Agency is a full-service boutique agency that’s been around for almost twenty years. Our founder, Jennifer Unter, got her start at a large New York agency, so The Unter Agency offers its clients really the best of both worlds: New York City contacts with boutique-level attention. Jennifer also has a law degree, so she’s well-versed in contracts, negotiation, and not taking no for an answer. I’ve been blessed to learn from her as well as Jen Nadol, who was a new agent herself about six years ago and knows what pitfalls to avoid. 

What She’s Looking For: 

3. What age groups do you represent—picture books, MG, and/or YA? What genres do you represent, and what are you looking for in submissions for these genres? 

I represent all things MG and YA (as well as select adult nonfiction), so I’m open to every genre within those categories. That said, I’ve noticed I sit up a little straighter when I see keywords like “mystery,” “thriller,” “horror,” “fantasy,” and even “speculative,” so those are probably the genres I think are easiest to sell right now. I also love sweet YA romances, but these have to have a super compelling hook (like a unique setting, story structure, or vicarious experience). 

As for what I’m looking for in submissions, it’s a heady combination of voice and concept. I mean, I have to think the story has a decent chance to sell, but I’m only going to want to read it if I also like the voice. 

4.  Is there anything you would be especially excited to see in the genres you are interested in? 

I’m going to interpret this question as “What are some random things you love?” 

In which case my answer would be college football, tennis, K-dramas* (especially historical K-dramas!), genealogy, and math. 

*My favorite K-dramas: The King’s Affection, Crash Landing on You, 100 Days My Prince, Hometown Cha-Cha-Cha, and Tastefully Yours. 

What She Isn’t Looking For: 

5. What types of submissions are you not interested in? 

I’m a lightweight when it comes to things like language, sex, and gore, so that’s one thing to keep in mind. And while I don’t mind if submissions tackle more sobering themes—in fact, I often welcome them—I do prefer these to be handled with some level of restraint. 

Agent Philosophy: 

6. What is your philosophy as an agent both in terms of the authors you want to work with and the books you want to represent? 

I want to work with ambitious, goal-oriented authors who have many stories in them (though I do think it’s important to typecast yourself at first). Except it’s kind of hard to tell how motivated someone is simply by looking at their face, so the main thing I try to locate is an indelible voice. I can’t guarantee I’ll sell the book I sign you with, of course, but if I love the way you write, I know I’ll want to read your next. 

Editorial Agent: 

7. Are you an editorial agent? If so, what is your process like when you’re working with your authors before submitting to editors? 

I can never seem to turn off my internal editor, so yes, I’m very much an editorial agent. When I prepare to make an offer, I send the prospective client a big-picture edit letter so they can see what types of changes I’m suggesting that they make (and so they can ask me questions they might have about those notes when we jump on the phone or Zoom). If The Call* ends up going well and they ultimately accept my offer, they’ll then use that edit letter to make the changes we discussed. Then I’ll line-edit their revision, at which point they’ll make smaller changes, at which point I’ll write my pitch letter, at which point we’ll go on submission. 

*I don’t offer representation when I send that edit letter because I want to verify that you’re a mostly normal person. That’s the only bar you have to clear when you and an agent have The Call—you literally just have to show that you’re not (completely) crazy. 

Query Methods and Submission Guidelines: (Always verify before submitting) 

8. How should authors query you and what do you want to see with the query letter? 

Please query me through QueryManager: https://QueryTracker.net/query/3838 

Besides the usual QueryManager sundries, the only thing you need to include with your query letter is your first three pages. 

9.  Do you have any specific dislikes in query letters or the first pages submitted to you? 

No specific dislikes when it comes to query letters. I couldn’t care less how you spell my name, which order you put your paragraphs in, or whether you include comp titles. The story is the king. 

As for the first pages, I prefer writing samples that jump pretty quickly into a scene and don’t noodle around with too much internal monologue. I also tend to dislike waking-up scenes, as I think your main character can always be doing something more interesting than sleeping when the inciting incident happens. 

Response Time: 

10. What’s your response time to queries and requests for more pages of a manuscript? 

The best place to look that up would be on QueryTracker, but it’s quick. It’s very quick. 

Self-Published and Small Press Authors: 

11.  Are you open to representing authors who have self-published or been published by smaller presses? What advice do you have for them if they want to try to find an agent to represent them? 

I’m absolutely open to representing authors who’ve self-published or been published by smaller presses, but usually only if they have a fresh project to shop. 

Clients: 

12. Who are some of the authors you represent? 

As of the beginning of July, when I filled out all of these answers, I only have two clients: M. W. Hook and Elizabeth Prats. We’re about to put M.’s whimsical MG fantasy on submission later this week, with Liz’s illustrated MG science fantasy to follow in the next few months! 

Interviews and Guest Posts: 

13. Please share the links to any interviews, guest posts, and podcasts you think would be helpful to writers interested in querying you. 

I think this is my first, so if you found this interview, you’ve already got the inside scoop. 

Links and Contact Info: 

14. Please share how writers should contact you to submit a query and your links on the Web. 

QueryManager: https://QueryTracker.net/query/3838

Blog: https://kristavandolzer.wordpress.com/

Twitter: https://x.com/kristavandolzer

Bluesky: https://bsky.app/profile/kristavandolzer.bsky.social 

Additional Advice: 

15. Is there any other advice you’d like to share with aspiring authors that we haven’t covered? 

I know it seems like agents and editors are just here to tell you no, but everything we do relies on everything you do. Authors and the words they write are the lifeblood of this industry, so don’t shortchange yourself. Treat agents and editors with kindness (as you hopefully treat everyone), but never settle for anything less than the respect you deserve. 

Thanks for sharing all your advice, Krista. 

Giveaway Details

­Krista is generously offering a query + 1st three pages critique to one lucky winner. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment through August 23rd. If you do not want to enter the contest, that’s okay. Just let me know in the comments. If I do not have your email (I can no longer get it from your Google Profile), you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address.

If you follow me on Twitter or mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry. This is an international giveaway. 

Have any experience with this agent? See something that needs updating? Please leave a comment or email me at natalieiaguirre7@gmail.com 

Note: These agent profiles and interviews presently focus on agents who accept children's fiction. Please take the time to verify anything you might use here before querying an agent. The information found here is subject to change.

Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

Saturday, August 16th I’m participating in the Old School Giveaway Hop 

Monday, August 18th I have an interview with debut author Ryan James Black and a giveaway of his MG The Dark Times of Nimble Nottingham 

Wednesday, August 20th I have an agent spotlight interview with Shelly Romero and a query critique giveaway 

Monday, August 25th I have an interview with author James Ponti and a giveaway of his MG Hurricane Heist 

I hope to see you on Saturday!

 

Author Interview: Lillie Vale and Hit Me with Your Best Charm Giveaway and IWSG Post

 Happy Wednesday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have Lillie Vale here to share about her YA contemporary fantasy/romance Hit Me with Your Best Charm. I really enjoy contemporary stories with a fantasy element, so I’m looking forward to reading this one. 

Here’s a blurb from Goodreads: 

The occasionally magic, always superstitious town of Prior’s End is famous for three things:

Whimsical charm at the annual Fall Festival.
The legend of the wishing well hidden in a forest bristling with secrets.
And Nova Marwood’s missing hiker father.

Every year without him, it gets easier to pretend Nova doesn’t believe in myth and magic. Easier to pretend she’s doing okay. Easier to pretend she doesn’t have a secret crush on the girl she fake-hates.

Kiara Mistry is the luckiest girl in town and the thief of every crush Nova had her heart set on first. In theory, Nova should resent Kiara. But it’s getting harder to deny her feelings.

When Nova lays an unintended hex on Kiara at the Fall Festival, and one misfortune after another swiftly follows, soon Kiara’s very survival at stake. To reverse the bad luck, Kiara’s exes turned BFFs commence a quest for the miraculous wishing well. There’s only one person who can get them there . . . Nova.

But to save Kiara—and maybe find her dad, too—she’ll have to believe in something much stronger than magic. Nova will need to believe in herself.

 


Before I get to Kate’s interview, I have my IWSG post. 

Posting: The first Wednesday is officially Insecure Writer's Support Group Day. 

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds! 

The awesome co-hosts this month are: Ronel Janse van Vuuren, Sarah - The Faux Fountain Pen, Olga Godim, and me! 

Optional Question: What is the most unethical practice in the publishing industry? 

One of the industry's biggest problems is the number of scammers impersonating agents. Almost every agency website that I visit when looking for agents has a warning that its agents have been impersonated. 

In addition, other scammers are pretending to be a legitimate publisher that can publish a writer’s manuscript. Of course, these scammers are all out for money from the writers/victims. 

Getting published is already so hard. And it’s terrible how we have to be super careful not to be scammed. You can find out a lot more information about the scams to watch for at Writer Beware. 

Interview With Lillie Vale 

Hi Lillie! Thanks so much for joining us. 

1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer. 

Thanks for having me! So, I’ve been telling stories and making books out of construction paper from a really young age, which eventually turned into sharing my writing online, like fanfic and roleplay, and from there it evolved into writing novels.

I wrote my first full-length manuscript ever during NaNoWriMo while I was at university just to see if I could do it, and I had my first book deal (for a different, much more polished manuscript) right after I graduated! Despite writing my whole life, for some reason, pursuing publication only became a dream after I finished writing that first manuscript, scribbled late at night or in between classes. Being an author sounded so lofty, you know? Like one of those impossible jobs, like being an actor, which is one of the suggestions my high school guidance counselor made after I took a career quiz. And in college, I was determined to Study! Something! Serious! Even though my passion very clearly lay elsewhere!

So, even though I’ve always been a writer, it was only after the first hurdle of writing a full book that I knew how much I wanted to be a published author. I’ve been fortunate that I got my heart’s desire at a young age and even more fortunate that I continue my dream job writing books. 

2. Wow! It’s amazing that you wrote a book that was published while in college. Where did you get the idea of Hit Me with Your Best Charm? 

Once upon a time, way back when, I thought this book was originally going to be a full-on contemporary rom-com. But my publisher was open to seeing something different, and since I’ve been writing magical and spooky stuff for longer than I’ve been writing rom-com, I was raring to rejig the premise of Hit Me with Your Best Charm. I remember doing some interviews during the release of my previous YA novel, Beauty and the Besharam, where I was like “All my published books so far have been firmly grounded in reality! I hope I get to flex with some spooky stuff soon!” Dear Past Lillie: you totally did!

I can usually pinpoint the exact spark that inspired me to write each of my novels, but in the case of Hit Me with Your Best Charm, its genesis was a lot of little sparks that luckily came together in a story I wanted to tell. Things like “All my published books take place in summer, and I’d love a cozy, spooky, autumnal setting this time!” and “As a LOTR girlie, I’d love to write a big friend group going on a quest to save one of their party, and OOOOOH, let’s call it The Fellowship of the Fling!!!” and “How about a mystical wishing well where instead of wishing for something, you can wish to undo something?”

Your Writing Process 

3. How did you decide on the magical elements of your story and know that you had added enough to not overdo it? What tips do you have for writers wanting to add magic to a contemporary story?

For me, the magic in Charm had to feel like a believable extension of the real world. Cozy and familiar, while the eeriness and mystery made the location distinct enough that readers wanted to uncover more. The magic had to be baked into the very foundation—the earth itself—of the town of Prior’s End. The forest that steals strangers and loved ones alike, the legendary wishing well, even the name of the town! As a character in the book remarks, “You know our town history. The magic is unpredictable. Prior’s End has played its part in more endings than not. It will always seek to destroy what came before. That is its nature.”

I didn’t want readers to feel like they were being thrown into a secondary world. I wanted them to question every mysterious happening and wonder, “Wait, is this real? Or just coincidence? Am I buying into superstition?”

As with any story element, it’s about hitting the right balance. That’s something only the author can decide for themselves. The magical elements integrated into the story need to align with the themes the author wants to explore. For example, magic is in the emotional DNA of Charm. It amplifies the guilt, regret, and redemption Nova experiences during the quest to find the wishing well. Is there ever a magical shortcut to doing the right thing? Is that shortcut worth it? Does it diminish the victory if it wasn’t hard-won? At what point does someone say enough, maybe the hard path is the one worth taking?

The magic in Charm influences the characters, the motivations, the world, and the plot events. So if you’re a writer on the fence about adding magic to a contemporary story, ask yourself: Does the magic serve the story? If yes, then it’s earned its place!

4. It’s good advice that the magic has to feel like an extension of the real world. Nova and Kiara’s relationship is a major part of your story. Share a bit about how you increased their emotional tension throughout the story. 

One of my favorite ways to add emotional tension to a story is when one or both of the main characters is keeping a colossal secret from the other. Especially if that secret is about them. In Nova’s case, she’s hiding her role in hexing Kiara, however inadvertently, because she doesn’t want the backlash from Kiara’s exes, The Fellowship of the Fling. And also . . . she doesn’t want her secret crush (and romantic rival) to know she’s responsible for this terrible thing . . . and maybe she can reverse it before anyone has to know? Then we have Kiara, who’s been pining for Nova for a few years, but hung back because Nova always acts so prickly that she thought, there’s no way Nova properly likes me back . . .

Teens (people!) are messy. Especially when it comes to love and honesty and guilt. And Nova’s battling all three of those things, which is kind of a recipe for disaster. Life rarely unfolds in a neat and tidy narrative. Reading about characters who have messy hearts but try to redeem themselves and do better in the future reminds and inspires us that we can do the same. And that there might be a happy ending for us, too. 

5. What was a fun part of writing this story? Why? 

I enjoyed every minute of writing Hit Me with Your Best Charm! Even the hard parts, because I knew the outcome would be so worth it. 

If I had to pick just one, though, I think it would have to be the story development phase. First, when everything is just starting to coalesce into story-shape and it’s all infinite possibilities, pure imagination, and impossibly glossy and bright with that new-idea shine. 

The second time is the revision, when I’ve had a little time away and can now circle back to see and reshape the manuscript with fresh eyes and fresh perspective. This is the when the magic happens! Of course, it can be exhausting and frustrating to take your book apart and look at how every element works together to create a harmonious whole, but when you address everything on your revision game plan, the story really and truly sparkles. 

Your Journey to Publication 

6. Jessica Watterson is your agent. How did she become your agent? 

Through a pretty standard route—hard work, persistence, timing, querying, a bit of waiting, and yes, a sprinkle of magic! Eventually, during the waiting, an incredible agent answered back. In my case, it was superstar agent Jessica Watterson, who I’ve been sharing my journey with since 2020. 

7. You’ve published two YA and two adult books since 2019 in addition to Hit Me with Your Best Charm. How did you get your first publishing contract? What has the process been like for your other books? 

I’ve actually published two YA books and three Adult books! Hit Me with Your Best Charm will be my sixth novel. My first book deal was directly with the publisher, while my subsequent books have been negotiated by my literary agent, Jessica Watterson.

Promoting Your Book 

8. How are you planning to promote Hit Me with Your Best Charm? How has your marketing changed as you publish more books? 

Since this is my first published novel with magical elements, I knew I wanted that to be the focus of most of my social media promotion. With every book under my belt, it’s confirmed how important word of mouth and reader love are to a book’s success—not just at launch, but in the weeks and months after pub, too. Books find their people thanks to the passionate readers who read, review, and recommend them. I hope I’ve been able to build on those reader connections from Small Town Hearts (YA) to The Shaadi Set-Up (Adult) to Beauty and the Besharam (YA) to The Decoy Girlfriend (Adult) to Wrapped with a Beau (Adult), and finally, to Hit Me with Your Best Charm (YA).

9. What are you working on now? 

I could tell you, but I’m going to keep that slow-burn simmering a while longer. Let’s just say that now that my first magical book is published, I want to keep writing more of them!

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Giveaway Details 

Lillie’s publisher is generously offering a hardback of Hit Me with Your Best Charm for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by August 16th. If I do not have your email (I can no longer get it from your Google Profile), you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address. 

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Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops

Monday, August 11th, I have an agent spotlight interview with Krista Van Dolzer and a query critique giveaway 

Saturday, August 16th, I’m participating in the Old School Giveaway Hop 

Monday, August 18th, I have an interview with debut author Ryan James Black and a giveaway of his MG The Dark Times of Nimble Nottingham 

Wednesday, August 20th, I have an agent spotlight interview with Shelly Romero and a query critique giveaway 

Monday, August 25th, I have an interview with author James Ponti and a giveaway of his MG Hurricane Heist 

I hope to see you on Monday!